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[gnome-user-docs] Review backup-* for 3.14

commit 04b4678194d0e77852ff6680b52843bd572e7043
Author: David King <amigadave amigadave com>
Date:   Sat Sep 20 12:23:34 2014 +0100

    Review backup-* for 3.14

 gnome-help/C/backup-check.page      |   22 ++++++++++++++------
 gnome-help/C/backup-frequency.page  |   10 ++++++--
 gnome-help/C/backup-how.page        |   12 +++++++---
 gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page |   36 +++++++++++++++++++---------------
 gnome-help/C/backup-what.page       |    8 +++++-
 gnome-help/C/backup-where.page      |   16 +++++++++-----
 gnome-help/C/backup-why.page        |    7 ++++-
 7 files changed, 71 insertions(+), 40 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-check.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-check.page
index 8f505d0..c2b1495 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-check.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-check.page
@@ -4,14 +4,22 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="files#backup"/>
-    <desc>Verify your backup was successful.</desc>
+
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-20" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>David King</name>
+      <email>davidk gnome org</email>
+    </credit>
+
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+    <desc>Verify your backup was successful.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Check your backup</title>
@@ -20,11 +28,11 @@
  backup was successful. If it didn't work properly, you could lose important
  data since some files could be missing from the backup.</p>
 
-   <p>When you use the file manager to copy or move files, the
- computer checks to make sure that all of the data transferred correctly.
- However, if you are transferring data that is very important to you,
- you may want to perform additional checks to confirm that your
- data has been transferred properly.</p>
+   <p>When you use <app>Files</app> to copy or move files, the computer checks
+   to make sure that all of the data transferred correctly. However, if you are
+   transferring data that is very important to you, you may want to perform
+   additional checks to confirm that your data has been transferred
+   properly.</p>
 
   <p>You can do an extra check by looking through the copied files
  and folders on the destination media. By checking to make sure that the files
@@ -36,4 +44,4 @@
  <app>Déjà Dup</app>. Such a program is more powerful and more reliable than
  just copying and pasting files.</p></note>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-frequency.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-frequency.page
index c1a0e29..3cfac41 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-frequency.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-frequency.page
@@ -4,9 +4,9 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="files#backup"/>
-    <desc>Learn how often you should backup your important files to make sure
-    that they're safe.</desc>
+
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-20" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
@@ -16,7 +16,11 @@
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
+
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+    <desc>Learn how often you should backup your important files to make sure
+    that they are safe.</desc>
   </info>
 
 <title>Frequency of backups</title>
@@ -44,4 +48,4 @@
  example, if spending a week re-writing lost documents is too long for you, you
  should back up at least once per week.</p>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page
index a9b7265..bb6d064 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page
@@ -4,9 +4,9 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="backup-why"/>
-    <desc>Use Déjà Dup (or some other backup application) to make copies of your
-    valuable files and settings to protect against loss.</desc>
+
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-20" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
@@ -20,7 +20,11 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+    <desc>Use Déjà Dup (or some other backup application) to make copies of
+    your valuable files and settings to protect against loss.</desc>
   </info>
 
 <title>How to back up</title>
@@ -45,11 +49,11 @@
  <item><p>Files that are already backed up somewhere else, such as to a CD, DVD,
  or other removable media.</p></item>
  <item><p>Files that you can recreate easily. For example, if you are a
- programmer, you don't have to back up the files that get produced when you
+ programmer, you do not have to back up the files that get produced when you
  compile your programs. Instead, just make sure that you back up the original
  source files.</p></item>
  <item><p>Any files in the Trash folder. Your Trash folder can be found in
  <file>~/.local/share/Trash</file>.</p></item>
 </list>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page
index 2afd103..777acbe 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page
@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="files#backup"/>
-    <desc>A list of folders where you can find documents, files and settings
-    that you may want to back up.</desc>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-20" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
@@ -23,6 +22,9 @@
     </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+    <desc>A list of folders where you can find documents, files and settings
+    that you may want to back up.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Where can I find the files I want to back up?</title>
@@ -37,18 +39,20 @@
   <p xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its"; its:locNote="translators: xdg dirs are localised by package 
xdg-user-dirs and need to be translated.  You can find the correct translations for your language here: 
http://translationproject.org/domain/xdg-user-dirs.html";>These are usually stored in your home folder 
(<file>/home/your_name</file>).
  They could be in subfolders such as Desktop, Documents, Pictures, Music and
  Videos.</p>
-  <p>If your backup medium has sufficient space (if it's an external hard disk,
- for example), consider backing up the entire Home folder. You can find out how
- much disk space your Home folder takes up by using the
- <app>Disk Usage Analyzer</app>.</p>
+  <p>If your backup medium has sufficient space (if it is an external hard
+  disk, for example), consider backing up the entire Home folder. You can find
+  out how much disk space your Home folder takes up by using the
+  <app>Disk Usage Analyzer</app>.</p>
  </item>
 
  <item>
   <p>Hidden files</p>
-  <p>Any file or folder name that starts with a period (.) is hidden by default.
- To view hidden files, click <guiseq><gui>View</gui><gui>Show Hidden Files</gui></guiseq>
- or press <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>H</key></keyseq>. You can copy these to a
- backup location like any other file.</p>
+  <p>Any file or folder name that starts with a period (.) is hidden by
+  default. To view hidden files, click the
+  <gui><media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/go-down.png"><span its:translate="yes">View 
options</span></media></gui>
+  button in the toolbar, and then choose <gui>Show Hidden Files</gui>, or press
+  <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>H</key></keyseq>. You can copy these to a
+  backup location like any other file.</p>
  </item>
 
  <item>
@@ -62,12 +66,12 @@
 
  <item>
   <p>System-wide settings</p>
-  <p>Settings for important parts of the system aren't stored in your Home
- folder. There are a number of locations that they could be stored, but most are
- stored in the <file>/etc</file> folder. In general, you won't need to back up
- these files on a home computer. If you are running a server, however, you
- should back up the files for the services that it is running.</p>
+  <p>Settings for important parts of the system are not stored in your Home
+  folder. There are a number of locations that they could be stored, but most
+  are stored in the <file>/etc</file> folder. In general, you will not need to
+  back up these files on a home computer. If you are running a server, however,
+  you should back up the files for the services that it is running.</p>
  </item>
 </list>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-what.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-what.page
index 62579e0..994914a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-what.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-what.page
@@ -4,8 +4,9 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="backup-why"/>
-    <desc>Back up anything that you can't bear to lose if something goes wrong.</desc>
+
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-20" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -19,8 +20,11 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
+    <desc>Back up anything that you cannot bear to lose if something goes
+    wrong.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>What to back up</title>
@@ -67,4 +71,4 @@
  easy to replace, on the other hand, you may not want to use up disk space by
  having backups of them.</p>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-where.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-where.page
index 8a444b3..08676a5 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-where.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-where.page
@@ -4,10 +4,10 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="backup-why"/>
-    <desc>Advice on where to store your backups and what type of storage device
-    to use.</desc>
     <title type="sort">c</title>
+
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-20" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -17,7 +17,11 @@
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+    <desc>Advice on where to store your backups and what type of storage device
+    to use.</desc>
   </info>
 
 <title>Where to store your backup</title>
@@ -53,12 +57,12 @@
      <p>Writable CDs or DVDs (low/medium capacity)</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-     <p>Online backup service (<link href = "http://aws.amazon.com/s3/";>Amazon S3</link>
- or <link href="https://one.ubuntu.com/";>Ubuntu One</link>, for example; capacity
- depends on price)</p>
+     <p>Online backup service
+     (<link href="http://aws.amazon.com/s3/";>Amazon S3</link>, for example;
+     capacity depends on price)</p>
     </item>
    </list>
 
   <p>Some of these options have sufficient capacity to allow for a backup of
  every file on your system, also known as a <em>complete system backup</em>.</p>
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-why.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-why.page
index 02e18dc..dc1f3e8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-why.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-why.page
@@ -4,16 +4,19 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="files#backup" />
-    <desc>Why, what, where and how of backups.</desc>
     <title type="link" role="trail">Backups</title>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-20" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
+
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+    <desc>Why, what, where and how of backups.</desc>
   </info>
 
 <title>Back up your important files</title>
@@ -30,4 +33,4 @@
 
 <links type="topic" style="2column"/>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
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