[gnome-user-docs] Review improvements added to disk-format.page
- From: David King <davidk src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-user-docs] Review improvements added to disk-format.page
- Date: Fri, 5 Sep 2014 21:21:33 +0000 (UTC)
commit 66a9ddf30c87e42edf25d2389fbe9ceaba526610
Author: David King <amigadave amigadave com>
Date: Fri Sep 5 22:21:07 2014 +0100
Review improvements added to disk-format.page
gnome-help/C/disk-format.page | 11 ++++++-----
1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/disk-format.page b/gnome-help/C/disk-format.page
index 352d955..58659b4 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/disk-format.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/disk-format.page
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
</item>
<item>
<p>In the toolbar underneath the <gui>Volumes</gui> section, click the
- execute icon. Then click <gui>Format…</gui>.</p>
+ gear icon. Then click <gui>Format…</gui>.</p>
</item>
<item>
<p>In the window that pops up, choose a file system <gui>Type</gui> for the
@@ -52,12 +52,13 @@
will be presented as a label.</p>
</item>
<item>
- <p>Give the disk a name and click <gui>Format…</gui> to begin wiping the
- disk.</p>
+ <p>Give the disk a name and click <gui>Format…</gui> to continue and show a
+ confirmation window. Check the details carefully, and click
+ <gui>Format</gui> to wipe the disk.</p>
</item>
<item>
- <p>Once the formatting has finished, <gui>safely remove</gui> the disk. It
- should now be blank and ready to use again.</p>
+ <p>Once the formatting has finished, click the eject icon to safely remove
+ the disk. It should now be blank and ready to use again.</p>
</item>
</steps>
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