[gnome-user-docs] Minor adjustments to sharing-* pages.

[Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>]

commit c89a35a5f75fcb24fc680768555dabe3c266458b
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill gnome org>
Date:   Mon Oct 13 10:08:41 2014 -0400

    Minor adjustments to sharing-* pages.

 gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page |    3 ++-
 gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page   |   27 ++++++++++++++++++++-------
 gnome-help/C/sharing-media.page     |   33 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++------
 gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page  |   20 +++++++++++++++++++-
 4 files changed, 68 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page
index a5085f8..68f335a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page
@@ -5,12 +5,13 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="bluetooth"/>
+    <link type="guide" xref="sharing"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="prefs-sharing"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.2" date="2013-05-13" status="draft"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-08" status="candidate"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-21" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-13" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page
index bd69fe9..02a6ea5 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.2" date="2013-05-09" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-13" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
@@ -27,6 +27,16 @@
 
   <title>Share your desktop</title>
 
+  <comment>
+    <cite date="2014-09-22">David King</cite>
+    <p>The controls for sharing with specific networks, under the Networks
+    section needs to be explained, perhaps as a separate page.</p>
+  </comment>
+  <comment>
+    <cite date="2014-10-13">Michael Hill</cite>
+    <p>Networks section added without explanatory details.</p>
+  </comment>
+
   <p>You can let other people view and control your desktop from another
   computer with a desktop viewing application. Configure <gui>Screen
   Sharing</gui> to allow others to access your desktop and set the security
@@ -82,12 +92,6 @@
     </item>
   </steps>
 
-  <comment>
-    <cite date="2014-09-22">David King</cite>
-    <p>The controls for sharing with specific networks, under the Networks
-    section needs to be explained, perhaps as a separate page.</p>
-  </comment>
-
   <section id="security">
   <title>Security</title>
 
@@ -131,6 +135,15 @@
   </terms>
   </section>
 
+  <section id="networks">
+  <title>Networks</title>
+
+  <p>The <gui>Networks</gui> section lists the networks to which you are
+  currently connected. Use the <gui>ON | OFF</gui> switch next to each to
+  choose where your desktop can be shared.</p>
+
+  </section>
+
 <!-- TODO: Check that this works.
   <section id="notification-icon">
   <title>Stop sharing your desktop</title>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing-media.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing-media.page
index c4ad597..eb10960 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing-media.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing-media.page
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-02" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-13" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
@@ -23,6 +23,16 @@
 
   <title>Share your music, photos and videos</title>
 
+  <comment>
+    <cite date="2014-09-22">David King</cite>
+    <p>The controls for sharing with specific networks, under the Networks
+    section needs to be explained, perhaps as a separate page.</p>
+  </comment>
+  <comment>
+    <cite date="2014-10-13">Michael Hill</cite>
+    <p>Networks section added without explanatory details.</p>
+  </comment>
+
   <p>You can browse, search and play the media on your computer using a
   <sys>UPnP</sys> or <sys>DLNA</sys> enabled device such as a phone, TV or game
   console. Configure <gui>Media Sharing</gui> to allow these devices to access
@@ -62,12 +72,14 @@
       <p>Switch <gui>Media Sharing</gui> to <gui>ON</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <gui style="button">+</gui> to open the
+      <p>By default, <file>Music</file>, <file>Pictures</file> and 
+      <file>Videos</file> are shared. To remove one of these, click the
+      <gui>X</gui> next to the folder name.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>To add another folder, click <gui style="button">+</gui> to open the
       <gui>Choose a folder</gui> window. Navigate <em>into</em> the desired
-      folder, <file>Music</file> in your <file>Home</file> folder for
-      example, and click <gui style="button">Open</gui>. Repeat for the other
-      folders you wish to share, for example <file>Pictures</file> and 
-      <file>Videos</file>.</p>
+      folder and click <gui style="button">Open</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Click <gui style="button">X</gui>. You will now be able to browse
@@ -75,4 +87,13 @@
     </item>
   </steps>
 
+  <section id="networks">
+  <title>Networks</title>
+
+  <p>The <gui>Networks</gui> section lists the networks to which you are
+  currently connected. Use the <gui>ON | OFF</gui> switch next to each to
+  choose where your media can be shared.</p>
+
+  </section>
+
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page
index 401794b..b477e5b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.1" date="2013-09-23" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-13" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
@@ -30,6 +30,15 @@
     from another computer. Add an info note about the two technologies
     involved: WebDAV and mDNS (?).</p>
   </comment>
+  <comment>
+    <cite date="2014-09-22">David King</cite>
+    <p>The controls for sharing with specific networks, under the Networks
+    section needs to be explained, perhaps as a separate page.</p>
+  </comment>
+  <comment>
+    <cite date="2014-10-13">Michael Hill</cite>
+    <p>Networks section added without explanatory details.</p>
+  </comment>
 
   <p>You can allow access to the <file>Public</file> folder in your
   <file>Home</file> folder from another computer on the network. Configure
@@ -98,4 +107,13 @@
   </terms>
   </section>
 
+  <section id="networks">
+  <title>Networks</title>
+
+  <p>The <gui>Networks</gui> section lists the networks to which you are
+  currently connected. Use the <gui>ON | OFF</gui> switch next to each to
+  choose where your personal files can be shared.</p>
+
+  </section>
+
 </page>