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[gnome-user-docs] Review wacom-* pages and others for 3.14

commit f27d9ef14cd4b86fd31d52dee280ab8da52bc380
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill gnome org>
Date:   Sun Oct 12 12:50:09 2014 -0400

    Review wacom-* pages and others for 3.14

 gnome-help/C/bluetooth-problem-connecting.page |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page         |    4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page                    |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/nautilus-connect.page             |    3 ++-
 gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page                |    6 +++---
 gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page          |    4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/wacom-left-handed.page            |    3 ++-
 gnome-help/C/wacom-mode.page                   |    3 ++-
 gnome-help/C/wacom-multi-monitor.page          |    3 ++-
 gnome-help/C/wacom-stylus.page                 |    3 ++-
 gnome-help/C/wacom.page                        |    3 ++-
 11 files changed, 21 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-problem-connecting.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-problem-connecting.page
index 8c200f9..21f5c56 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-problem-connecting.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-problem-connecting.page
@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-12" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page
index a42cc31..7ce7e5b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-04" status="candidate"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-12" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
 
   <title>What is Bluetooth visibility?</title>
 
-  <p>Bluetooth visibility simply refers to whether other devices can discover
+  <p>Bluetooth visibility refers to whether other devices can discover
   your computer when searching for Bluetooth devices. When Bluetooth is turned
   on and the <gui>Bluetooth</gui> panel is open, your computer will advertise
   itself to all other devices within range, allowing them to attempt to connect
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page
index 8453121..9fef46e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
   <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
   <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
   <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
+  <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-12" status="candidate"/>
 
   <credit type="author">
     <name>Shaun McCance</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/nautilus-connect.page b/gnome-help/C/nautilus-connect.page
index 7620594..aba9c0f 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/nautilus-connect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/nautilus-connect.page
@@ -6,8 +6,9 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="files" group="more"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="sharing"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.6.0" version="0.2" date="2012-10-06" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6.0" date="2012-10-06" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-12" status="candidate"/>
 
     <desc>View and edit files on another computer over FTP, SSH, Windows
     shares, or WebDAV.</desc>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page b/gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page
index 49a6825..db1cf91 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-09-29" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-12" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
       <p>Select <gui>Purge Trash &amp; Temporary Files</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Set the <gui>Automatically empty Trash</gui> or
+      <p>Set one or both of the <gui>Automatically empty Trash</gui> or
       <gui>Automatically purge Temporary Files</gui> switches to
       <gui>ON</gui>.</p>
     </item>
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@
       buttons to perform these actions immediately.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>X</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Click the <gui>X</gui> to close.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page b/gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page
index 70aebad..93f9515 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-05-21" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-12" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@
       <gui>Show Notifications</gui> to <gui>ON</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>X</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Click the <gui>X</gui> to close.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/wacom-left-handed.page b/gnome-help/C/wacom-left-handed.page
index 0b69bd4..5674933 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/wacom-left-handed.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/wacom-left-handed.page
@@ -4,8 +4,9 @@
       id="wacom-left-handed">
   <info>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.3" date="2013-11-02" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-02" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-12" status="candidate"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="wacom"/>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/wacom-mode.page b/gnome-help/C/wacom-mode.page
index 04397bc..84f5a08 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/wacom-mode.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/wacom-mode.page
@@ -4,8 +4,9 @@
       id="wacom-mode">
   <info>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.3" date="2013-11-02" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-02" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-12" status="candidate"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="wacom"/>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/wacom-multi-monitor.page b/gnome-help/C/wacom-multi-monitor.page
index 06c3922..0f59eae 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/wacom-multi-monitor.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/wacom-multi-monitor.page
@@ -4,8 +4,9 @@
       id="wacom-multi-monitor">
   <info>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.3" date="2013-11-02" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-02" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-12" status="candidate"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="wacom"/>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/wacom-stylus.page b/gnome-help/C/wacom-stylus.page
index 67c5bf4..534ae5f 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/wacom-stylus.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/wacom-stylus.page
@@ -4,8 +4,9 @@
       id="wacom-stylus">
   <info>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.3" date="2013-11-02" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-02" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-12" status="candidate"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="wacom"/>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/wacom.page b/gnome-help/C/wacom.page
index c2c6299..0b2e9c2 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/wacom.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/wacom.page
@@ -12,8 +12,9 @@
 
   <link type="guide" xref="prefs"/>
 
-  <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.3" date="2013-11-02" status="review"/>
+  <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-02" status="review"/>
   <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
+  <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-12" status="candidate"/>
 
   <credit type="author">
     <name>Michael Hill</name>
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