[gnome-user-docs] Tidy sharing-desktop.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 0c65f93a5f4aae172a2e57e4e09513d3488b9705
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Tue Sep 23 13:25:07 2014 +0100

    Tidy sharing-desktop.page

 gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page |   45 ++++++++++++++++++-------------------
 1 files changed, 22 insertions(+), 23 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page
index 786edef..bd69fe9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="sharing"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="prefs-sharing"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8.2" version="0.3" date="2013-05-09" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.2" date="2013-05-09" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
 
@@ -92,14 +92,15 @@
   <title>Security</title>
 
   <p>It is important that you consider the full extent of what each security
- option means before changing it.</p>
+  option means before changing it.</p>
+
   <terms>
     <item>
       <title>New connections must ask for access</title>
       <p>If you want to be able to choose whether to allow someone to access
- your desktop, enable <gui>New connections must ask for access</gui>.
- If you disable this option, you will not be asked whether you want to allow
- someone to connect to your computer.</p>
+      your desktop, enable <gui>New connections must ask for access</gui>.  If
+      you disable this option, you will not be asked whether you want to allow
+      someone to connect to your computer.</p>
       <note style="tip">
         <p>This option is enabled by default.</p>
       </note>
@@ -107,20 +108,21 @@
     <item>
       <title>Require a Password</title>
       <p>To require other people to use a password when connecting to your
- desktop, enable <gui>Require a Password</gui>. If you do
- not use this option, anyone can attempt to view your desktop.</p>
+      desktop, enable <gui>Require a Password</gui>. If you do not use this
+      option, anyone can attempt to view your desktop.</p>
       <note style="tip">
         <p>This option is disabled by default, but you should enable it and set
- a secure password.</p>
+        a secure password.</p>
       </note>
     </item>
-<!--    <item>
+<!-- TODO: check whether this option exists.
+    <item>
       <title>Allow access to your desktop over the Internet</title>
-      <p>If your router supports UPnP Internet Gateway Device Protocol and it is
- enabled, you can allow other people who are not on your local network to view
- your desktop. To allow this, select <gui>Automatically configure UPnP router to
- open and forward ports</gui>. Alternatively, you can configure your router
- manually.</p>
+      <p>If your router supports UPnP Internet Gateway Device Protocol and it
+      is enabled, you can allow other people who are not on your local network
+      to view your desktop. To allow this, select <gui>Automatically configure
+      UPnP router to open and forward ports</gui>. Alternatively, you can
+      configure your router manually.</p>
       <note style="tip">
         <p>This option is disabled by default.</p>
       </note>
@@ -129,16 +131,13 @@
   </terms>
   </section>
 
-<!--
+<!-- TODO: Check that this works.
   <section id="notification-icon">
-  <title>Show notification area icon</title>
-  <p>To be able to disconnect someone who is viewing your desktop, you need to
- enable this option. If you select <gui>Always</gui>, this icon will be visible
- regardless of whether someone is viewing your desktop or not.</p>
-    <note style="warning">
-      <p>If this option is disabled, it is possible for someone to connect to
- your desktop without your knowledge, depending on the security settings.</p>
-    </note>
+  <title>Stop sharing your desktop</title>
+
+  <p>You can disconnect someone who is viewing your desktop using the
+  notification icon in the message tray.</p>
+
   </section>
 -->