[gnome-devel-docs/wip/develguide] improve the introduction



commit 45da3d00de8de7a324d23b63af5555727548eefa
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Fri May 2 17:50:44 2014 +0200

    improve the introduction

 platform-overview/C/index.page |    2 +-
 1 files changed, 1 insertions(+), 1 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/platform-overview/C/index.page b/platform-overview/C/index.page
index 00dfb27..be79933 100644
--- a/platform-overview/C/index.page
+++ b/platform-overview/C/index.page
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
 
   <title>GNOME Application Development Platform Overview</title>
 
-  <p>This overview provides an introduction to the components and libraries that you can use in your 
application.</p>
+  <p>The GNOME application development platform provides the full range of functionality required to create 
modern GNOME applications. This overview describes what you can do with the application development platform, 
and introduces the libraries that you will need in order to create your application.</p>
 
   <links type="topic" style="left" groups="#first"/>
 


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