[release-notes/gnome-3-12] minor tweaks

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit dea39964e3300064e48544b7f9ea54a44b5c3ca2
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Tue Mar 18 16:25:15 2014 +0000

    minor tweaks

 help/C/index.page     |    2 +-
 help/C/more-apps.page |    4 ++--
 2 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 4e60ea4..146847b 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@
   <section id="hi-res-displays">
     <title>Improved High Resolution Display Support</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png" />
-    <p>High resolution display support was first introduced in &lastversion;. This provided high-resolution 
display support for much of GNOME 3. Since then, high-resolution display support has been extended to include 
all the key aspects of the core GNOME 3 experience, including the <gui>Activities Overview</gui>, top bar, 
lock screen and system dialogs.</p>
+    <p>High-resolution display support was first introduced in &lastversion;. This provided high-resolution 
display support for much of GNOME 3. Since then, this feature has been extended to include all the key 
aspects of the core GNOME 3 experience, including the <gui>Activities Overview</gui>, top bar, lock screen 
and system dialogs.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="app-folders">
diff --git a/help/C/more-apps.page b/help/C/more-apps.page
index 6f3132f..804f1a9 100644
--- a/help/C/more-apps.page
+++ b/help/C/more-apps.page
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
   <section id="gedit">
     <title>A New Look for gedit</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>The <app>gedit</app> text editor has had a major update for this release. The new design incorporates 
all of <app>gedit</app>'s previous features into a more compact interface, which gives more space for your 
work. Use of popovers for selecting the document format and tab width are more efficient than the previous 
use of dialogs and menus, and consolidated sidebar controls also give more space for content while retaining 
the original functionality.</p>
+    <p>The <app>gedit</app> text editor has had a major update for this release. The new design incorporates 
all of <app>gedit</app>'s previous features into a more compact interface, which gives more space for your 
work. Use of popovers for selecting the document format and tab width is more efficient than the previous use 
of dialogs and menus, and consolidated sidebar controls also give more space for content while retaining the 
original functionality.</p>
     <p>Other notable improvements include new shortcuts for opening the last closed tab with 
<keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>Shift</key><key>T</key></keyseq> and for changing case.</p>
   </section>
 
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@
     <title>Games Update Pack</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
     <p>GNOME's games have had an upgrade for 3.12. A total of 10 games have new modernized window layouts 
(this includes <app>Chess</app>, <app>Five or More</app>, <app>Four-in-a-row</app>, <app>Iagno</app>, 
<app>Mahjongg</app>, <app>Mines</app>, <app>Quadrapassel</app>, <app>Swell Foop</app>, <app>Tetravex</app>, 
and <app>Tali</app>). <app>Lights Off</app> and <app>Quadrapassel</app> now use the dark window theme to 
match their visual styles, and <app>Four-in-a-row</app> has a new theme that uses artwork from the 
<app>Faenza</app> icon set.</p>
-    <p>Additionally, <app>Chess</app> and <app>Iagno</app> have improved game logic for this release. In 
both games the computer player moves slower to give the game a more natural pace, and the computer player in 
<app>Chess</app> is now much easier to play against when using the GNU Chess engine.</p>
+    <p>Additionally, <app>Chess</app> and <app>Iagno</app> have improved game logic for this release. In 
both games the computer player moves more slowly to give the game a more natural pace, and the computer 
player in <app>Chess</app> is now much easier to play against when using the GNU Chess engine.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="photos">