[seahorse/wip/userdocs: 132/244] help: Reflow, reword pgp-publish.page



commit e5b6ffdabb49a5a19930f717834da13f494af677
Author: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
Date:   Tue Aug 20 16:55:18 2013 +0530

    help: Reflow, reword pgp-publish.page

 help/C/pgp-publish.page |   66 +++++++++++++++++-----------------------------
 1 files changed, 25 insertions(+), 41 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/pgp-publish.page b/help/C/pgp-publish.page
index 6c8b648..252136b 100644
--- a/help/C/pgp-publish.page
+++ b/help/C/pgp-publish.page
@@ -24,7 +24,6 @@
 
   <p>After <link xref="pgp-create">creating</link> your
   <link xref="about-pgp">PGP keypair</link> you can choose to publish the
-
   <em>public key</em> on the Internet. This allows anyone to
   <link xref="misc-key-import">import</link> your public keys and send you
   encrypted files and communication. When you keep your public keys unpublished
@@ -33,46 +32,31 @@
 
   <steps>
     <title>How do I publish my key?</title>
-      <item>
-        <p>Select the PGP key you want to publish.</p>
-      </item>
-      <item>
-       <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Remote</gui>
-       <gui style="menuitem">Sync and Publish Keys…</gui></guiseq>.</p>
-      </item>
-      <item>
-       <p>Click the <gui style="button">Key Servers</gui> button.</p>
-      </item>
-      <item>
-       <p>Three <link xref="about-key-servers">key servers</link>
-       will already be listed by <app>Passwords and Keys</app>.</p>
-       <note style="tip">
-         <p>You can also add the key server of your choice to the list by
-         clicking the <gui style="add">Add</gui> button. Select the
-         appropriate key server type. Key servers are identified by the
-         protocol they use to communicate. Look for the first few letters in
-         the Internet URL of your key server to identify its type. In the
-         <gui style="input">Host</gui> field, paste the Internet URL of your
-         key server, and click <gui style="button">OK</gui>. To remove a key
-         server from the list, select it with your mouse and click
-         <gui style="button">Remove</gui>.</p>
-       </note>
-      </item>
-      <item>
-       <p>From the drop down box next to
-       <gui style="group">Publish keys to</gui>, select the key server that
-       you want to publish your key on.</p>
-      </item>
-      <item>
-       <p>Check the
-       <gui style="checkbox">Automatically retrieve keys from key servers</gui>
-       checkbox to retrieve any key that is published on the
-       server you have selected in the previous step. You can also check the
-       <gui style="checkbox">Automatically sync modified keys with key servers</gui>
-       checkbox to ensure that any modifications to a key on the
-       key server, like a signature are updated on your copy of the key
-       too.</p>
-      </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select the PGP key you want to publish.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Remote</gui>
+      <gui style="menuitem">Sync and Publish Keys…</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click the <gui style="button">Key Servers</gui> button to see the list
+      of key servers on which you can publish your public key.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>From the <gui style="group">Publish keys to</gui> menu, select the key
+      server that you want to publish your key on.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Tick the
+      <gui style="checkbox">Automatically retrieve keys from key servers</gui>
+      checkbox to retrieve any key that is published on the server you have
+      selected in the previous step. You can also tick the
+      <gui style="checkbox">Automatically sync modified keys with key servers</gui>
+      checkbox to ensure that any modifications to a key on the key server,
+      like a signature, are updated on your copy of the key too.</p>
+      <!--Not sure about this - Aruna 18/08/2013-->
+    </item>
   </steps>
 
 </page>


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