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[seahorse/wip/userdocs: 216/218] help: Minor edits/review

commit dadae8122a4ce5b6b20c94c3663f148e4b6dc8ed
Author: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
Date:   Sun Sep 15 09:33:32 2013 +0530

    help: Minor edits/review

 help/C/keyring-lock.page            |    3 +-
 help/C/keyring-unlock.page          |    2 +-
 help/C/keyring-update-password.page |    4 +-
 help/C/passwords-view.page          |    2 +-
 help/C/pgp-create.page              |    4 +-
 help/C/pgp-expiration-change.page   |   17 ++++++-------
 help/C/pgp-photoid.page             |   41 ++++++++++++++++++----------------
 help/C/pgp-publish.page             |    4 +-
 help/C/pgp-retrieve-remote.page     |    8 +++---
 help/C/pgp-sign.page                |    4 +-
 help/C/subkeys-add.page             |    9 +++++--
 help/C/subkeys-examine.page         |    9 +++++--
 help/C/subkeys-revoke.page          |    4 +-
 13 files changed, 60 insertions(+), 51 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/keyring-lock.page b/help/C/keyring-lock.page
index ba45076..11e9d7b 100644
--- a/help/C/keyring-lock.page
+++ b/help/C/keyring-lock.page
@@ -36,7 +36,8 @@
   <steps>
     <title>To lock your password keyring:</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Select the keyring of your choice from the list.</p>
+      <p>From the list of keyrings under <gui>Passwords</gui> on the left side
+      panel, select the keyring to be locked.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Right click on the selected keyring and select <gui>Lock</gui>, or
diff --git a/help/C/keyring-unlock.page b/help/C/keyring-unlock.page
index 5aa0602..52c4135 100644
--- a/help/C/keyring-unlock.page
+++ b/help/C/keyring-unlock.page
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
   <steps>
     <title>To unlock your keyring:</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Select the keyring of your choice from the panel on your left. It is
+      <p>Select the keyring to be unlocked from the panel on your left. It is
       listed under <gui>Passwords</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
diff --git a/help/C/keyring-update-password.page b/help/C/keyring-update-password.page
index 94e2949..b862e24 100644
--- a/help/C/keyring-update-password.page
+++ b/help/C/keyring-update-password.page
@@ -28,9 +28,9 @@
   be updated at any time.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <title>To update the password for your password keyring:</title>
+    <title>To update the password for a password keyring:</title>
       <item>
-       <p>Select the password keyring of your choice from the list, under
+       <p>Select the password keyring from the list, under
        <app>Passwords</app>, on the left side panel.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
diff --git a/help/C/passwords-view.page b/help/C/passwords-view.page
index 567912e..eef0a34 100644
--- a/help/C/passwords-view.page
+++ b/help/C/passwords-view.page
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
       keyring will be displayed.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Right click on a password of your choice, from the list, and select
+      <p>Right click on the password you want to check, and select
       <gui>Properties</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
diff --git a/help/C/pgp-create.page b/help/C/pgp-create.page
index 5b21bb7..f6767a1 100644
--- a/help/C/pgp-create.page
+++ b/help/C/pgp-create.page
@@ -48,8 +48,8 @@
       <p>Press <gui>Create</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>In the password dialog, enter a password of your choice for the key.
-      Retype the password to confirm your choice.</p>
+      <p>In the password dialog, enter a password for the key. Retype the
+      password to confirm your choice.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Press <gui style="button">OK</gui> to finish.</p>
diff --git a/help/C/pgp-expiration-change.page b/help/C/pgp-expiration-change.page
index 5f88bdc..4b804c7 100644
--- a/help/C/pgp-expiration-change.page
+++ b/help/C/pgp-expiration-change.page
@@ -26,9 +26,9 @@
   key expire on an earlier date.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <title>To change the expiration date of a key:</title>
+    <title>To change the expiration date of a PGP key:</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Select the PGP key of your choice from the list.</p>
+      <p>Select the PGP key from the list.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Right click on the selected key and select <gui>Properties</gui>.</p>
@@ -41,16 +41,15 @@
         <item>
          <p>To change the expiration date of the master key, press the small
          button with the picture of a calendar next to <gui>Expires</gui>, on
-         the right side of the dialog. You can then select the date of your
-         choice from the calendar.</p>
+         the right side of the dialog. You can then select the new expiration
+         date from the calendar.</p>
         </item>
         <item>
          <p>To change the expiration date of a
-         <link xref="pgp-subkeys">subkey</link>, expand the
-         <gui>Subkeys</gui> panel and select the subkey of your choice from
-         the list. Press the <gui style="button">Expire</gui> button on the
-         left of the panel and select the new expiration date of your
-         choice.</p>
+         <link xref="pgp-subkeys">subkey</link>, expand the <gui>Subkeys</gui>
+         panel and select the subkey from the list. Press the
+         <gui style="button">Expire</gui> button on the left of the panel and
+         select the new expiration date.</p>
        </item>
       </list>
     </item>
diff --git a/help/C/pgp-photoid.page b/help/C/pgp-photoid.page
index 03867eb..be325a3 100644
--- a/help/C/pgp-photoid.page
+++ b/help/C/pgp-photoid.page
@@ -39,25 +39,28 @@
   </note>
 
   <steps>
-    <title>To attach a photo ID:</title>
-      <item>
-        <p>Select the PGP key to which you want to attach a photo ID.</p>
-      </item>
-      <item>
-       <p>Right click on the chosen key and select
-       <guiseq><gui style="menuitem">Properties</gui>
-       <gui>Owner</gui></guiseq>.</p>
-      </item>
-      <item>
-       <p>Press the button marked with a <gui style="button">+</gui> on
-       the left hand side to add a photo.</p>
-      </item>
-      <item>
-        <p>Select the photo of your choice from your computer.</p>
-      </item>
-      <item>
-        <p>Click <gui style="button">Close</gui> to finish.</p>
-      </item>
+    <title>To attach a photo ID to a PGP key:</title>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select <gui>GnuPG keys</gui> from the left side panel.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select the PGP key.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Right click on the chosen key and select
+      <guiseq><gui style="menuitem">Properties</gui>
+      <gui>Owner</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Press the button marked with a <gui style="button">+</gui> on the left
+      hand side to add a photo.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select the photo from your computer.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click <gui style="button">Close</gui> to finish.</p>
+    </item>
   </steps>
 
   <note style="tip">
diff --git a/help/C/pgp-publish.page b/help/C/pgp-publish.page
index c3a47bb..aba2ede 100644
--- a/help/C/pgp-publish.page
+++ b/help/C/pgp-publish.page
@@ -48,8 +48,8 @@
       of key servers on which you can publish your public key.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>To publish your key on a key server of your choice, select the key
-      server from the <gui>Publish keys to</gui> menu.</p>
+      <p>To publish your key on a key server, select the key server from the
+      <gui>Publish keys to</gui> menu.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Press <gui style="button">Close</gui> to go back to the previous
diff --git a/help/C/pgp-retrieve-remote.page b/help/C/pgp-retrieve-remote.page
index b630485..51c458d 100644
--- a/help/C/pgp-retrieve-remote.page
+++ b/help/C/pgp-retrieve-remote.page
@@ -42,10 +42,10 @@
       <p>Press the <gui style="button">Search</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>From the list of search results, select the key of your choice, right
-      click on it and select <gui style="menuitem">Import</gui>. Alternatively,
-      you can also press the <gui style="button">Import</gui> button present at
-      the top of the dialog after selecting the key.</p>
+      <p>From the list of search results, select the key you want to import,
+      right click on it and select <gui style="menuitem">Import</gui>.
+      Alternatively, you can also press the <gui style="button">Import</gui>
+      button present at the top of the dialog after selecting the key.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
diff --git a/help/C/pgp-sign.page b/help/C/pgp-sign.page
index cad1dd9..b8d1875 100644
--- a/help/C/pgp-sign.page
+++ b/help/C/pgp-sign.page
@@ -30,8 +30,8 @@
     <title>To sign a key:</title>
     <item>
       <p>Import the <link xref="pgp-retrieve-remote">remote key</link> or
-      <link xref="pgp-import">keyfile</link> of your choice into
-      <app>Passwords and Keys</app>.</p>
+      <link xref="pgp-import">keyfile</link> containing the key to be signed
+      into <app>Passwords and Keys</app>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>From the list of <gui>GnuPG keys</gui> select the imported key.</p>
diff --git a/help/C/subkeys-add.page b/help/C/subkeys-add.page
index bfb5806..debee77 100644
--- a/help/C/subkeys-add.page
+++ b/help/C/subkeys-add.page
@@ -26,12 +26,15 @@
   right subkey each time you want to encrypt or sign when you do this.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <title>To add extra subkeys:</title>
+    <title>To add extra subkeys to a PGP key:</title>
       <item>
-       <p>Select the <em>GnuPG keypair</em> of your choice from the list.</p>
+        <p>Select <gui>GnuPG keys</gui> from the left side panel.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
-       <p>Right click on the key chosen in the previous step and select
+       <p>Select the <gui>Personal PGP key</gui> from the list.</p>
+      </item>
+      <item>
+       <p>Right click on the selected key and select
        <guiseq><gui>Properties</gui><gui>Details</gui></guiseq>.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
diff --git a/help/C/subkeys-examine.page b/help/C/subkeys-examine.page
index 46a899a..f30c9f0 100644
--- a/help/C/subkeys-examine.page
+++ b/help/C/subkeys-examine.page
@@ -26,9 +26,12 @@
   subkey.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <title>To see all the <em>subkeys</em> in a keypair:</title>
+    <title>To see all the subkeys in a PGP key:</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Select the <em>GnuPG keypair</em> of your choice from the list.</p>
+      <p>Select the <gui>GnuPG keys</gui> from the left side panel.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select the <gui>Personal PGP key</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Right click on the key chosen in the previous step and select
@@ -38,7 +41,7 @@
       <p>If the <gui>Subkeys</gui> panel is not expanded, expand it.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>All the subkeys under the selected master key will be listed in the
+      <p>All the subkeys for the selected PGP key will be listed in the
       panel.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
diff --git a/help/C/subkeys-revoke.page b/help/C/subkeys-revoke.page
index 99b433f..5214ede 100644
--- a/help/C/subkeys-revoke.page
+++ b/help/C/subkeys-revoke.page
@@ -37,14 +37,14 @@
       <p>Select <gui>GnuPG keys</gui> from the panel on the left.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Right click on the key of your choice and select
+      <p>Right click on the PGP key and select
       <guiseq><gui>Properties</gui><gui>Details</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Expand the subkeys panel if required.</p>
     </item>-->
     <item>
-      <p>Select the subkey of your choice from the list and press the
+      <p>Select the subkey from the list and press the
       <gui style="button">Revoke</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
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