[seahorse/wip/userdocs: 104/218] help: Update passwords-keyring-create.page



commit 5b2793049db5eccff275a7ad69612ed954932c4c
Author: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
Date:   Tue Aug 20 16:47:21 2013 +0530

    help: Update passwords-keyring-create.page
    
    Reword the page to conform to the new default UI.

 help/C/passwords-keyring-create.page |   34 +++++++++++++++++++---------------
 1 files changed, 19 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/passwords-keyring-create.page b/help/C/passwords-keyring-create.page
index 8ef5528..b83930c 100644
--- a/help/C/passwords-keyring-create.page
+++ b/help/C/passwords-keyring-create.page
@@ -37,27 +37,31 @@
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>In the <gui>Add Password Keyring</gui> dialog type in a new name for
-      your password keyring in the <gui>New Keyring Name</gui> textbox and
+      your password keyring in the <gui>New Keyring Name</gui> field and
       press <gui style="button">Add</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Type in a password to protect your keyring, retype it to confirm your
-      password and press <gui style="button">Continue</gui> to finish.</p>
-      <note style="info">
-       <p>If you do not want to password-protect your keyring you can leave
-       the <gui>Password</gui> and <gui>Confirm</gui> textboxes blank and
-       press <gui style="button">Continue</gui>. <app>Passwords and Keys</app>
-       will ask you to confirm your decision to leave the keyring unprotected.
-       Press the <gui style="button">Continue</gui> buton to confirm your
-       choice and finish.</p>
-      </note>
+      <p>If you want your keyring to be protected with a password, type a
+      password of your choice in the <gui>Password</gui> field. Otherwise,
+      leave this field blank.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>To confirm your password, retype it in the <gui>Confirm</gui> field.
+      This field can be left blank if the <gui>Password</gui> field has been
+      left blank.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Press the <gui style="button">Continue</gui> button. If you have not
+      protected your keyring with a password, <app>Passwords and Keys</app>
+      will ask you to confirm your decision to do so. Press the
+      <gui>Continue</gui> button in the new dialog, to confirm your decision
+      and finish.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Your new password keyring will now be listed under
-      <gui>Passwords</gui> if you have ticked
-      <guiseq><gui style="menu">View</gui>
-      <gui style="menuitem">By keyring</gui></guiseq>. Otherwise it will be
-      sorted alpahabetically.</p>
+      <gui>Passwords</gui> if <guiseq><gui style="menu">View</gui>
+      <gui style="menuitem">By keyring</gui></guiseq> has been ticked.
+      Otherwise it will be sorted alphabetically.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 


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