[seahorse/wip/userdocs: 117/242] help: Update passwords-stored-new-create.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 9185f46d89bb86dc8d622a236f993a1d3c145f2a
Author: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
Date:   Tue Aug 20 16:49:03 2013 +0530

    help: Update passwords-stored-new-create.page

 help/C/passwords-stored-new-create.page |   34 +++++++++++++++++++-----------
 1 files changed, 21 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/passwords-stored-new-create.page b/help/C/passwords-stored-new-create.page
index 2ae6acb..c476588 100644
--- a/help/C/passwords-stored-new-create.page
+++ b/help/C/passwords-stored-new-create.page
@@ -5,8 +5,8 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#passwords"/>
-
-    <revision pkgversion="3.9" version="0.1" date="2013-07-18" status="review"/>
+    <link type="topic" xref="passwords-keyring-create"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.9" version="0.1" date="2013-07-18" status="draft"/>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -37,21 +37,29 @@
       <gui style="button">Continue</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>From the drop down menu next to <gui>Keyring</gui> select the
+      <p>From the <gui>Keyring</gui> menu, select the
       password keyring in which you want to store your password.</p>
-      <note style="info">
-       <p> The default keyring is displayed as the first choice in the drop
-       down menu. You can
-       <link xref="passwords-keyring-change-default">change the default
-       keyring</link>.</p>
-      </note>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Type out a description for your password in the
-      <gui>Description</gui> textbox and type the password in the password
-      textbox. You can tick the <gui style="checkbox">Show password</gui>
-      checkbox if you want to see the password text while typing it out.</p>
+      <p>In the <gui>Description</gui> field, you can add additional
+      information about the password like the date of creation, or the name of
+      the application it protects, etc.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Type the password in the <gui>Password</gui> field. You can tick the
+      <gui style="checkbox">Show password</gui> checkbox if you want to see the
+      password text while typing it out.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Press the <gui style="button">Add</gui> button to finish.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
+  <note style="tip">
+    <p>The default keyring is displayed as the first choice in the
+    <gui>Keyring</gui> drop down menu. You can
+    <link xref="passwords-keyring-change-default">change the default
+    keyring</link>.</p>
+  </note>
+
 </page>