[seahorse/wip/userdocs: 198/270] help: Review about-keyring.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit a976d431b4b969c275a13c22981845e84623fa52
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Mon Aug 26 20:58:21 2013 +0100

    help: Review about-keyring.page

 help/C/about-keyring.page |   29 +++++++++++++++++------------
 1 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/about-keyring.page b/help/C/about-keyring.page
index 70b9943..c67322b 100644
--- a/help/C/about-keyring.page
+++ b/help/C/about-keyring.page
@@ -4,10 +4,11 @@
       id="about-keyring">
 
   <info>
-    <link type="guide" xref="learn-about-keys" group="first"/>
-    <link type="guide" xref="passwords" group="#first"/>
+    <link type="guide" xref="learn-about-keys"/>
+    <link type="guide" xref="passwords"/>
 
     <revision version="0.1" date="2011-10-23" status="stub"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-08-26" status="review"/>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -21,25 +22,29 @@
       <email its:translate="no">aruna evam gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor copyright">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <desc>A keyring is used to group related passwords and keys.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>What is a keyring?</title>
 
-  <comment>
-    <cite date="2011-10-23" href="mailto:jwcampbell gmail com">Jim Campbell</cite>
-    <p>This assumes the reader knows how to.... By the end of this page,
-    the reader will be able to....</p>
-  </comment>
-
   <p>Much like a keyring in real life allows you to keep certain sets of keys
   together, a <em>keyring</em> in <app>Passwords and Keys</app> allows you to
-  group related passwords and keys together.</p>
+  keep passwords and keys in separate groups.</p>
+
+  <p>You may find this feature useful if you want some keys to be available
+  when you log in, but other keys to only be avaible if you enter a password
+  for that particular keyring.</p>
 
-  <p>You may find this feature useful if you want some passwords to be
-  available when you log in, but others to only be available if you enter a
-  password for that particular keyring.</p>
+  <note>
+    <p>By default, <app>Passwords and Keys</app> uses just one keyring to
+    store all of your passwords and keys.</p>
+  </note>
 
   <!-- stefw: is this page really necessary, at least with this title?
     Ideally we would remove the terms 'GNOME keyring' from the user