[seahorse/wip/userdocs: 168/210] help: Modify pgp-sync.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 420185d99bf5e018dfe19d54f2272624eab2fc46
Author: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
Date:   Tue Sep 10 00:30:59 2013 +0530

    help: Modify pgp-sync.page
    
    Change sync->synchronize everywhere in the page.

 help/C/pgp-sync.page |   31 +++++++++++++++++--------------
 1 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/pgp-sync.page b/help/C/pgp-sync.page
index 0052a2f..70b9005 100644
--- a/help/C/pgp-sync.page
+++ b/help/C/pgp-sync.page
@@ -17,28 +17,31 @@
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>Have your local key copies update every change made to a key on a
-    key server.</desc>
+    <desc>Synchronize information present in your local key with the
+    corresponding key on a key server.</desc>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Sync your keys</title>
+  <title>Synchronize your keys</title>
 
-  <p>PGP keys in your keyring have to be synced with a key server to ensure
-  that any changes made to the key on the key server, like a new signature, are
-  updated in your local copy of the key. You need a working Internet connection
-  to sync your keys.</p>
+  <p>PGP keys in your keyring have to be synchronized with a key server to
+  ensure that any changes made to the key on the key server, like a new
+  signature, are updated in your local copy of the key. Similarly, when you
+  change information on your local key copy, like the expiration date, or when
+  you sign someone's key, you could synchronize the keys to update the changes
+  on the remote copy of the key. You need a working Internet connection to
+  synchronize your keys.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <title>How do I sync a key?</title>
+    <title>How do I synchronize a key?</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Select the PGP key you wish to sync.</p>
+      <p>Select the PGP key you wish to synchronize.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Remote</gui>
       <gui style="menuitem">Sync and Publish Keys…</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click the <gui style="button">Sync</gui> button to sync your
+      <p>Click the <gui style="button">Sync</gui> button to synchronize your
       key.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
@@ -46,10 +49,10 @@
   <note style="important">
     <title>Why is the <gui style="button">Sync</gui> button not
     clickable?</title>
-    <p>Only PGP keys that have been published on a key server can be synced.
-    If the <gui style="button">Sync</gui> button is not clickable, check if
-    the key has been published on a key server. In the case of syncing your
-    own keys, publish them, before syncing them.</p>
+    <p>Only PGP keys that have been published on a key server can be
+    synchronized. If the <gui style="button">Sync</gui> button is not
+    clickable, check if the key has been published on a key server. In the case
+    of synchronizing your own keys, publish them, before synchronizing them.</p>
   </note>
 
 </page>