[seahorse/wip/userdocs: 354/363] help: Minor edits to pgp-expiration-change.page



commit 26d94ca8246646447e75fa9d2cfdd90202525b7c
Author: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
Date:   Sun Sep 15 09:35:44 2013 +0530

    help: Minor edits to pgp-expiration-change.page

 help/C/pgp-expiration-change.page |   17 ++++++++---------
 1 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/pgp-expiration-change.page b/help/C/pgp-expiration-change.page
index 5f88bdc..4b804c7 100644
--- a/help/C/pgp-expiration-change.page
+++ b/help/C/pgp-expiration-change.page
@@ -26,9 +26,9 @@
   key expire on an earlier date.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <title>To change the expiration date of a key:</title>
+    <title>To change the expiration date of a PGP key:</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Select the PGP key of your choice from the list.</p>
+      <p>Select the PGP key from the list.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Right click on the selected key and select <gui>Properties</gui>.</p>
@@ -41,16 +41,15 @@
         <item>
          <p>To change the expiration date of the master key, press the small
          button with the picture of a calendar next to <gui>Expires</gui>, on
-         the right side of the dialog. You can then select the date of your
-         choice from the calendar.</p>
+         the right side of the dialog. You can then select the new expiration
+         date from the calendar.</p>
         </item>
         <item>
          <p>To change the expiration date of a
-         <link xref="pgp-subkeys">subkey</link>, expand the
-         <gui>Subkeys</gui> panel and select the subkey of your choice from
-         the list. Press the <gui style="button">Expire</gui> button on the
-         left of the panel and select the new expiration date of your
-         choice.</p>
+         <link xref="pgp-subkeys">subkey</link>, expand the <gui>Subkeys</gui>
+         panel and select the subkey from the list. Press the
+         <gui style="button">Expire</gui> button on the left of the panel and
+         select the new expiration date.</p>
        </item>
       </list>
     </item>


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