[seahorse/wip/userdocs: 191/283] about-key-servers.page: Mark for review



commit 2557fd19058178862ae8aa51874cf729fce5f497
Author: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
Date:   Wed Aug 21 19:54:57 2013 +0530

    about-key-servers.page: Mark for review
    
    Reworded bits and pieces, marked for review.

 help/C/about-key-servers.page |    8 ++++----
 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/about-key-servers.page b/help/C/about-key-servers.page
index 68183c8..f98ac08 100644
--- a/help/C/about-key-servers.page
+++ b/help/C/about-key-servers.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="learn-about-keys"/>
 
     <revision version="0.1" date="2011-10-23" status="stub"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.9" version="0.1" date="2013-06-18" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.9" version="0.1" date="2013-06-18" status="review"/>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -30,9 +30,9 @@
   key server and use it.</p>
 
   <p><app>Passwords and Keys</app> provides you an interface to
-  <link xref="pgp-publish">publish</link> your public keys or to
-  <link xref="pgp-retrieve-remote">find and retrieve</link> a remote key. You
-  can also use <app>Passwords and Keys</app> to
+  <link xref="pgp-publish">submit</link> your public keys to a key server and
+  <link xref="pgp-retrieve-remote">find and retrieve</link> remote keys from
+  key servers. You can also use <app>Passwords and Keys</app> to
   <link xref="pgp-sync">sync</link> the keys in your keyring with the key
   server so that they are updated when someone signs them or modifies them in
   some other way.</p>


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