[seahorse/wip/userdocs: 345/420] Modify pgp-create.page



commit ea0333231a3945a4167ffbc601dd72360edc8c10
Author: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
Date:   Fri Aug 30 00:22:37 2013 +0530

    Modify pgp-create.page
    
    Reword certain steps.

 help/C/pgp-create.page |   21 +++++++++++----------
 1 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/pgp-create.page b/help/C/pgp-create.page
index 9984798..e905edd 100644
--- a/help/C/pgp-create.page
+++ b/help/C/pgp-create.page
@@ -48,8 +48,8 @@
       <p>Press <gui>Create</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>In the password dialog, enter a password of your choice for the key
-      and retype the password to confirm it.</p>
+      <p>In the password dialog, enter a password of your choice for the key.
+      Retype the password to confirm your choice.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Press <gui style="button">OK</gui> to finish.</p>
@@ -61,8 +61,8 @@
   on your keyboard. This will help <app>Passwords and Keys</app> to create a
   truly random key. The key will be listed under <gui>GnuPG keys</gui>.</p>
 
-  <section id="advanced" ui:expanded="false">
-    <title>Advanced PGP key options</title>
+<section id="advanced" ui:expanded="false">
+  <title>Advanced PGP key options</title>
 
   <p>Expand the <gui>Advanced key options</gui> panel to choose custom values
   for key type, key strength and key expiration date.</p>
@@ -86,18 +86,19 @@
     </item>
     <item>
     <title>Expiration Date</title>
-      <p>When a key expires, it can no longer be used to sign or encrypt. You
-      can either set your key to <gui style="checkbox">Never Expire</gui>, or
-      select an expiration date and time for it.</p>
+      <p>When a key expires, it can no longer be used to sign or encrypt. In
+      <app>Passwords and Keys</app>, you can either set your key to
+      <gui style="checkbox">Never Expire</gui>, or select an expiration date
+      and time for it.</p>
     </item>
   </terms>
 
-  </section>
-
-  <note>
+  <note style="tip">
     <p>The <gui>Full Name</gui>, <gui>Email Address</gui> and
     <gui>Comment</gui> details of a GnuPG key are called the
     <link xref="pgp-userid">user ID</link> of the key.</p>
   </note>
 
+</section>
+
 </page>


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