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[release-notes/gnome-3-12] Minor style fixes

commit 01fd6e678179f6a0a9a2f22b1375de7ce89d04fd
Author: Piotr Drąg <piotrdrag gmail com>
Date:   Sat Mar 15 23:34:13 2014 +0100

    Minor style fixes
    
    And an occasional typo fix.

 help/C/developers.page   |   18 +++++++++---------
 help/C/index.page        |    6 +++---
 help/C/more-apps.page    |    2 +-
 help/C/more-core-ux.page |    4 ++--
 4 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/developers.page b/help/C/developers.page
index 191f581..ccece2a 100644
--- a/help/C/developers.page
+++ b/help/C/developers.page
@@ -27,22 +27,22 @@
   <section id="gtk-widgets">
     <title>New GTK+ Widgets</title>
     <p>GtkActionBar: A new container, which has a centered child like GtkHeaderBar.</p>
-    <p>GtkPopover: A new widget that is can be used for transient views, as an alternative to menus or 
dialogs</p>
-    <p>GtkFlowBox: A container that its children in a reflowing grid, which can be oriented horizontally or 
vertically</p>
+    <p>GtkPopover: A new widget that is can be used for transient views, as an alternative to menus or 
dialogs.</p>
+    <p>GtkFlowBox: A container that its children in a reflowing grid, which can be oriented horizontally or 
vertically.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="notifications">
     <title>New Notifications API</title>
     <p>GNotification: Notification support in GApplication</p>
-    <p>a new API that adds desktop notification support to GApplication. Allows for notifications to persist 
after an application exits and restart the application when the notification is clicked
+    <p>A new API that adds desktop notification support to GApplication. Allows for notifications to persist 
after an application exits and restart the application when the notification is clicked
 replaces libnotify, but can fall back to the org.freedesktop.Notifications D-Bus interface. More details at: 
https://wiki.gnome.org/HowDoI/GNotification</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="process-launching">
     <title>Powerful New Process Launching API</title>
     <p>GSubprocess: More powerful process launching API</p>
-    <p>gapplication commandline utility can be used for launching apps, opening files, invoking application 
actions and listing apps and actions, with bash completion</p>
-    <p>GApplication supports commandline handling, including a convenient --gapplication-service option</p>
+    <p>gapplication command line utility can be used for launching apps, opening files, invoking application 
actions and listing apps and actions, with bash completion</p>
+    <p>GApplication supports command line handling, including a convenient --gapplication-service option</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="docs">
@@ -58,12 +58,12 @@ replaces libnotify, but can fall back to the org.freedesktop.Notifications D-Bus
   <section id="tracker">
     <title>Tracker</title>
     <p>libmediaart: New library created from sources in Tracker to handle art associated with media (like 
audio/video). Not to be confused with thumbnail generation which is usually for personal content (e.g. photos 
taken).</p>
-    <p>New library: for managing miners you can use libtracker-control now</p>
+    <p>New library: for managing miners you can use libtracker-control now.</p>
     <p>New feature: passive extraction offers specific metadata extraction (e.g. image orientation) by 
listening to signals on resource changes. Previously inserting ANY information about a resource was done in 
one step. This feature means that now file data (e.g. file name, size, etc) is inserted even if specific 
metadata isn't.</p>
-    <p>New feature: prioritization of RDF types is available to enable extraction of certain file types 
before others</p>
-    <p>New feature: SPARQL functions tracker:normalize() and tracker:unaccent() have been added</p>
+    <p>New feature: prioritization of RDF types is available to enable extraction of certain file types 
before others.</p>
+    <p>New feature: SPARQL functions tracker:normalize() and tracker:unaccent() have been added.</p>
     <p>New feature: tracker-sparql --tree to describe the database ontology and help understand the class 
hierarchy.</p>
-    <p>New feature: encoding detection for metadata with ICU</p>
+    <p>New feature: encoding detection for metadata with ICU.</p>
     <p>New feature: store's GraphUpdated signal delay is now configurable. This signal is what's used to 
notify of resource changes in the database (e.g. new file added). Previously it was always 1 second.</p>
   </section>
 
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index d41d71b..51b7456 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -60,17 +60,17 @@
   <section id="hi-res-displays">
     <title>Improved High Resolution Display Support</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png" />
-    <p>High resolution display support was first introduced the last GNOME release, version &lastversion;. 
This provided high-resolution display support for much GNOME 3, and for &gnomeversion; this work has 
continued. Since then, High-resolution display support has been extended to include all they key aspects of 
the core GNOME 3 experience, including the Activities Overview, top bar, lock screen and system dialogs.</p>
+    <p>High resolution display support was first introduced the last GNOME release, version &lastversion;. 
This provided high resolution display support for much GNOME 3, and for &gnomeversion; this work has 
continued. Since then, high resolution display support has been extended to include all they key aspects of 
the core GNOME 3 experience, including the Activities Overview, top bar, lock screen and system dialogs.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="app-folders">
     <title>Create Your Own Application Folders</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>Application folders can be found in the Activities Overview. GNOME 3 has included several automatic 
application folders in the past, which contain <gui>Utilities</gui> and <gui>Sundry</gui> items. From 
&gnomeversion;, it is possible to create your own folders, as well as move applications from the automatic 
folders to ones of your choosing. These folder management features can be found in the <app>Software</app> 
application: simply go to the <gui>Installed</gui> view, select some applications, and choose which folder 
you want them to belong to.s</p>
+    <p>Application folders can be found in the Activities Overview. GNOME 3 has included several automatic 
application folders in the past, which contain <gui>Utilities</gui> and <gui>Sundry</gui> items. From 
&gnomeversion;, it is possible to create your own folders, as well as move applications from the automatic 
folders to ones of your choosing. These folder management features can be found in the <app>Software</app> 
application: simply go to the <gui>Installed</gui> view, select some applications, and choose which folder 
you want them to belong to.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="more">
-    <title>And that's not all</title>
+    <title>And That's Not All</title>
     <p>There's much more to GNOME &gnomeversion;. Read on to find out...</p>
     <links type="topic" groups="first second third fourth"/>
   </section>
diff --git a/help/C/more-apps.page b/help/C/more-apps.page
index f6fc1a7..b76e634 100644
--- a/help/C/more-apps.page
+++ b/help/C/more-apps.page
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
   <section id="web">
     <title>Upgrade Your Web</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p><app>Web</app>, the GNOME web browser, also features a long list of interface improvements for 3.12. 
It has a new address bar design, which keeps the header bar clean and informative, a new style for incognito 
windows, better downloading behaviour, an updated Most Visited page (which let's you jump to the sites you 
visit most often), redesigned cookies and passwords dialogs and nicer error pages.</p>
+    <p><app>Web</app>, the GNOME web browser, also features a long list of interface improvements for 3.12. 
It has a new address bar design, which keeps the header bar clean and informative, a new style for incognito 
windows, better downloading behavior, an updated Most Visited page (which lets you jump to the sites you 
visit most often), redesigned cookies and passwords dialogs and nicer error pages.</p>
     <p>The new version also includes a number of significant performance improvements, including faster 
start up times, and improvements to page loading times.</p>
   </section>
 
diff --git a/help/C/more-core-ux.page b/help/C/more-core-ux.page
index 1541a5f..66a7cd7 100644
--- a/help/C/more-core-ux.page
+++ b/help/C/more-core-ux.page
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
     <list>
       <item><p>If you are using mobile broadband, the location of the cell tower you are connected 
to.</p></item>
       <item><p>GPS, if you have a 3G modem that incorporates it.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Nearby Wi-Fi access points. This usies the <link 
href="https://location.services.mozilla.com/";>Mozilla Location Service</link>, and you can help to improve 
the accuracy of this by using the MozStumbler Android app on your phone.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Nearby Wi-Fi access points. This uses the <link 
href="https://location.services.mozilla.com/";>Mozilla Location Service</link>, and you can help to improve 
the accuracy of this by using the MozStumbler Android app on your phone.</p></item>
     </list>
     <p>Feedback about when location services are being used and controls for turning them on and off have 
also been introduced for 3.12. If an application is accessing your location, an icon is displayed in the top 
bar. The system status menu also includes controls to disable these services. More detailed privacy controls 
are planned for the future.</p>
   </section>
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@
       <item><p>Updated symbolic icon theme.</p></item>
       <item><p>Visual theme refinements.</p></item>
       <item><p>New tab style.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Faster startup times</p></item>
+      <item><p>Faster startup times.</p></item>
       <item><p>Smoother transitions in the applications view.</p></item>
       <item><p>Revamped Bluetooth panel.</p></item>
       <item><p>Improved keyboard navigation in the Activities Overview.</p></item>
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