[gnome-user-docs] Bluetooth-visibility: first pass

[Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>]

commit 66810871c538f65e78693ad59408e64741925e76
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill gnome org>
Date:   Tue Mar 4 21:14:49 2014 -0500

    Bluetooth-visibility: first pass

 gnome-help/C/bluetooth-remove-connection.page |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page       |    3 ++-
 gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page        |   24 ++++++++++++++++++------
 gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page           |    1 +
 4 files changed, 22 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-remove-connection.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-remove-connection.page
index dcc11b6..6eea1a1 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-remove-connection.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-remove-connection.page
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
     <credit type="editor">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
-      <years>2013</years>
+      <years>2014</years>
     </credit>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page
index e036f6e..f2a0b96 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.12" version="0.3" date="2014-03-05" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" version="0.3" date="2014-03-04" status="review"/>
 
     <desc>Enable or disable the Bluetooth device on your computer.</desc>
 
@@ -24,6 +24,7 @@
     <credit type="editor">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2014</years>
     </credit>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page
index 309dcbc..8ca801a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" version="0.3" date="2014-03-04" status="incomplete"/>
 
     <desc>Whether or not other devices can discover your computer.</desc>
 
@@ -15,31 +16,42 @@
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email its:translate="no">shaunm gnome org</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2014</years>
+    </credit>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
   <title>What is Bluetooth visibility?</title>
 
   <p>Bluetooth visibility simply refers to whether other devices can discover
-  your computer when searching for Bluetooth devices. When Bluetooth visibility
-  is turned on, your computer will advertise itself to all other devices within
-  range, allowing them to attempt to connect to you.</p>
+  your computer when searching for Bluetooth devices. When Bluetooth is turned
+  on and the <gui>Bluetooth</gui> panel is open, your computer will advertise
+  itself to all other devices within range, allowing them to attempt to connect
+  to you.</p>
 
   <p>Your computer does not need to be visible to search for other devices, but
   those devices need to be visible for your computer to discover them.</p>
 
-  <p>After you have <link xref="bluetooth-connect-device">connected to a device</link>,
-  neither your computer nor the device needs to be visible to communicate with each
-  other.</p>
+  <p>After you have
+  <link xref="bluetooth-connect-device">connected to a device</link>,
+  neither your computer nor the device needs to be visible to communicate with
+  each other.</p>
 
   <comment>
     <cite date="2013-11-09" href="mailto:mdhillca gmail com">mdhill</cite>
     <p>Add note about changing the display name of your computer with a link to
     the future sharing-displayname page. Under 3.10 this is allowed in Fedora,
     for example, but not in openSUSE.</p>
+    <cite date="2014-03-04" href="mailto:mdhillca gmail com">mdhill</cite>
+    <p>Add a note about the "Visible as" label.</p>
   </comment>
 
+<!--
   <p>Unless you or someone you trust needs to connect to your computer from
   another device, you should leave visibility off.</p>
+-->
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page
index b97ad02..9bf8562 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page
@@ -12,6 +12,7 @@
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2014</years>
     </credit>
 
     <desc>Set which folders and devices can be to shared over Bluetooth.</desc>