[gnome-user-docs] Bluetooth: begin update with -turn-on-off

[Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>]

commit dd924590589e5543730e998fd6cc76e11eac3077
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill gnome org>
Date:   Tue Mar 4 17:38:08 2014 -0500

    Bluetooth: begin update with -turn-on-off

 gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page |    4 +++
 gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page    |   34 +++++++++++++--------------
 gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page        |    2 +-
 3 files changed, 21 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page
index bd8f64e..486c4b7 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page
@@ -34,6 +34,10 @@
 
   <title>Connect your computer to a Bluetooth device</title>
 
+<media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/bluetooth-menu.png" style="floatend">
+  <p its:translate="yes">The Bluetooth icon on the top bar</p>
+</media>
+
   <p>Before you can use a Bluetooth device like a mouse or a headset, you first
   need to connect your computer to the device. This is also called pairing the
   Bluetooth devices.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page
index 502c525..e036f6e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" version="0.3" date="2014-03-05" status="review"/>
 
     <desc>Enable or disable the Bluetooth device on your computer.</desc>
 
@@ -29,10 +30,6 @@
 
 <title>Turn Bluetooth on or off</title>
 
-<media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/bluetooth-menu.png" style="floatend">
-  <p its:translate="yes">The Bluetooth icon on the top bar</p>
-</media>
-
   <comment>
     <cite date="2013-11-09" href="mailto:mdhillca gmail com">mdhill</cite>
     <p>Add link to shell-terminology definition of system status *area* of top
@@ -51,11 +48,14 @@
   files, but turn it off to conserve power. To turn Bluetooth on:</p>
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
-      start typing <gui>Bluetooth</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Click the system status area of the top bar.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select <gui>Bluetooth</gui>. The Bluetooth section of the menu will
+      expand.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Bluetooth</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+      <p>Select <gui>Bluetooth Settings</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Set the switch in the titlebar to <gui>ON</gui>.</p>
@@ -72,10 +72,9 @@
     the <key>Fn</key> key.</p>
  </if:when>
  <p>Many laptop computers have a hardware switch or key combination to turn
- Bluetooth on and off. If the Bluetooth hardware is turned off, you will not
- see a Bluetooth icon in the top bar. Look for a switch on your computer or
- a key on your keyboard. The keyboard key is often accessed with the help of
- the <key>Fn</key> key.</p>
+ Bluetooth on and off. Look for a switch on your computer or a key on your
+ keyboard. The keyboard key is often accessed with the help of the
+ <key>Fn</key> key.</p>
 </if:choose>
 
 <if:choose>
@@ -86,20 +85,19 @@
   <p>To turn Bluetooth off:</p>
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
-      start typing <gui>Bluetooth</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Click the system status area of the top bar.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Bluetooth</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+      <p>Select <gui>Bluetooth</gui>. The Bluetooth section of the menu will
+      expand.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Set the switch in the titlebar to <gui>OFF</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Select <gui>Turn Off</gui>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 </if:choose>
 
-<note><p>You only need to switch <gui>Visibility</gui> on if you are connecting
-to this computer from another device. See <link xref="bluetooth-visibility"/>
-for more information.</p></note>
+<note><p>Your computer is <link xref="bluetooth-visibility">visible</link> as
+long as the <gui>Bluetooth</gui> panel is open.</p></note>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page
index 72d880c..b97ad02 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>Set which folders and devices are able to share over Bluetooth.</desc>
+    <desc>Set which folders and devices can be to shared over Bluetooth.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>