[release-notes/gnome-3-12] fix up and elaborate the core ux page

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit 0e8476ba8ad0af16b59b58d23c352816809cec74
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Tue Mar 4 12:58:51 2014 +0000

    fix up and elaborate the core ux page

 help/C/more-core-ux.page |   50 ++++++++++++++++++++++-----------------------
 1 files changed, 24 insertions(+), 26 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/more-core-ux.page b/help/C/more-core-ux.page
index 794b824..8322e88 100644
--- a/help/C/more-core-ux.page
+++ b/help/C/more-core-ux.page
@@ -4,15 +4,19 @@
       type="topic"
       id="more-core-ux">
 
+  <title>Updates to the Core GNOME 3 User Experience</title>
+
+  <p>GNOME 3.12 includes numerous other new features and enhancements. Here are some of the other 
improvements that can be found in the latest version.</p>
+
   <section id="app-folders">
-    <title>Customizable App Folders</title>
-    <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png" style="floatright" />
+    <title>Create Your Own Application Folders</title>
+    <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
     <p>Several automatic app folders have existing for a couple of releases. With 3.12, it will be possible 
to manually organize your apps into folders, so you can choose.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="geolocation">
     <title>Upgraded Geolocation</title>
-    <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png" style="floatright" />
+    <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
     <p>First introduced in 3.10. Now has more reliable and accurate sources in addition to existing IP-based 
source: Cell towers and GPS, using 3G modems
 WiFi, using Mozilla Location Service that allows you to easily help improve geolocation by 
installing/running a small app on your android phone. Status icon indicates when an app is using geolocation 
services.</p>
     <p>Controls in the system status area allow geolocation to be turned off.</p>
@@ -20,40 +24,34 @@ WiFi, using Mozilla Location Service that allows you to easily help improve geol
 
   <section id="cloud-integration">
     <title>Extended Cloud Integration</title>
-    <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png" style="floatright" />
-    <p>Google cloud print support, Pocket integration in Videos, Facebook integration in Photos.</p>
+    <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
+    <p>Google cloud print support, Pocket integration in Videos, Facebook integration in Photos. The 
Settings app now lets you select images from a Flickr account to use as a background.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="initial-setup">
     <title>Revamped Initial Setup Assistant</title>
-    <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png" style="floatright" />
+    <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
     <p>Major redesign for 3.12. Based on user testing funded by Intel."</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="popovers">
     <title>Popovers</title>
-    <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png" style="floatright" />
+    <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
     <p>New interface element for 3.12.</p>
   </section>
 
-  <info>
-    <link type="guide" xref="index#more" group="first"/>
-    <desc>GNOME 3.10 is packed with other new features and enhancements</desc>
-    <credit type="author">
-      <name its:translate="no">Allan Day</name>
-      <email its:translate="no">allanday gnome org</email>
-    </credit>
-    <credit type="author">
-      <name its:translate="no">Juanjo Marín</name>
-      <email its:translate="no">jjmarin gnome org</email>
-    </credit>
-    <license>
-      <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
-    </license>
-  </info>
-
-  <title>Updates to the Core GNOME 3 User Experience</title>
-
-  <p>GNOME 3.12 includes numerous other new features and enhancements. Here are some of the other 
improvements that can be found in the latest version.</p>
+  <section id="core-ux-other">
+    <title>Other Improvements</title>
+    <p>There are many other smaller enhancements to the core user experience for 3.10. These include:</p>
+    <list>
+      <item><p>Updated symbolic icon theme.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Visual theme refinements.</p></item>
+      <item><p>New tab style.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Faster startup times</p></item>
+      <item><p>Smoother transitions in the applications view.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Revamped Bluetooth panel.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Improved keyboard navigation in the Activities Overview.</p></item>
+    </list>
+  </section>
 
 </page>