[gnome-user-docs] Review desktop-background.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit e7fa87efe072bbc132f3c0c1900c98670498becc
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Wed Jun 18 19:02:18 2014 -0400

    Review desktop-background.page

 system-admin-guide/C/desktop-background.page |   54 +++++++++++++++++--------
 1 files changed, 37 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/system-admin-guide/C/desktop-background.page b/system-admin-guide/C/desktop-background.page
index e581186..1e7b76a 100644
--- a/system-admin-guide/C/desktop-background.page
+++ b/system-admin-guide/C/desktop-background.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="appearance" />
     <revision pkgversion="3.11" date="2014-01-29" status="draft"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-06-17" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-06-17" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Matthias Clasen</name>
@@ -28,50 +28,70 @@
       <email its:translate="no">davidk gnome org</email>
       <years>2014</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2014</years>
+    </credit>
 
-    <desc>Set the default desktop background using a dconf keyfile.</desc>
+    <desc>Change the default desktop background.</desc>
    </info>
 
-  <title>Customize the default desktop background</title>
+  <title>Set custom background</title>
 
-  <p>You can configure the default desktop background and its appearance by
-  setting the relevant GSettings keys from the
-  <sys>org.gnome.desktop.background</sys> schema in a dconf keyfile.</p>
+  <p>You can change the default desktop background to one that you want to use.
+  For example, you may want to use a background with your company or university
+  logo instead of the default GNOME background.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <title>Set the default background</title>
     <include href="dconf-snippets.xml"
-      xpointer="xpointer(/*/*[ xml:id='dconf-profile-user'])"
-      xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+             xpointer="xpointer(/*/*[ xml:id='dconf-profile-user'])"
+             xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+    <include href="dconf-snippets.xml"
+             xpointer="xpointer(/*/*[ xml:id='dconf-profile-user-dir'])"
+             xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
     <item>
-      <p>Create a <sys>local</sys> keyfile for machine-wide settings in
-      <file>/etc/dconf/db/local.d/<var>01-background</var></file>:
-      </p>
+      <p>Create the key file
+      <file>/etc/dconf/db/local.d/00-background</file> to provide
+      information for the <sys>local</sys> database.</p>
+      <listing>
+        <title><file>/etc/dconf/db/local.d/00-screensaver</file></title>
 <code># Specify the dconf path
 [org/gnome/desktop/background]
 
 # Specify the path to the desktop background image file
 picture-uri='file:///usr/local/share/backgrounds/wallpaper.jpg'
+
 # Specify one of the rendering options for the background image:
-# 'none', 'wallpaper', 'centered', 'scaled', 'stretched', 'zoom', 'spanned'
 picture-options='scaled'
+
 # Specify the left or top color when drawing gradients, or the solid color
 primary-color='000000'
+
 # Specify the right or bottom color when drawing gradients
 secondary-color='FFFFFF'</code>
+      </listing>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Optionally, override the user's setting and prevent the user from
-      changing it in <file>/etc/dconf/db/local.d/locks/background</file>:</p>
-        <code># List the keys used to configure the desktop background
+      <p>To prevent the user from overriding these settings, create the file
+      <file>/etc/dconf/db/local.d/locks/background</file> with the following
+      content:</p>
+      <listing>
+        <title><file>/etc/dconf/db/local.d/locks/background</file></title>
+<code># Lock desktop background settings
 /org/gnome/desktop/background/picture-uri
 /org/gnome/desktop/background/picture-options
 /org/gnome/desktop/background/primary-color
 /org/gnome/desktop/background/secondary-color</code>
+      </listing>
     </item>
     <include href="dconf-snippets.xml"
-      xpointer="xpointer(/*/*[ xml:id='dconf-update'])"
-      xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+             xpointer="xpointer(/*/*[ xml:id='dconf-update'])"
+             xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+    <include href="dconf-snippets.xml"
+             xpointer="xpointer(/*/*[ xml:id='dconf-logoutin'])"
+             xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </steps>
 
 </page>