[gnome-user-docs] Update dconf-nfs-home.page

[Petr Kovář <pmkovar src gnome org>]

commit d8514827169d4424a2ad5535ac4a119ce5183aa0
Author: Petr Kovar <pkovar redhat com>
Date:   Wed Jun 18 13:46:49 2014 -0400

    Update dconf-nfs-home.page

 system-admin-guide/C/dconf-nfs-home.page |   24 +++++++++++++++---------
 system-admin-guide/Makefile.am           |    1 -
 2 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/system-admin-guide/C/dconf-nfs-home.page b/system-admin-guide/C/dconf-nfs-home.page
index e394d66..c792265 100644
--- a/system-admin-guide/C/dconf-nfs-home.page
+++ b/system-admin-guide/C/dconf-nfs-home.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="login#management" />
     <revision version="0.1" date="2013-03-19" status="draft"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-05-09" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-06-17" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Jana Svarova</name>
@@ -19,8 +20,14 @@
       <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Petr Kovar</name>
+      <email>pknbe volny cz</email>
+      <years>2014</years>
+    </credit>
 
-    <desc>Update the system configuration for <sys>dconf</sys> to store settings in an <sys>NFS</sys> home 
directory.</desc>
+    <desc>Update the system configuration for <sys>dconf</sys> to store settings
+    in an <sys>NFS</sys> home directory.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Store settings over <sys>NFS</sys></title>
@@ -38,18 +45,17 @@
 
   <p>For <sys its:translate="no">dconf</sys> to work correctly when using
   <sys>Network File System</sys> (<sys>NFS</sys>) home directories, the
-  <sys its:translate="no">dconf</sys> <em>keyfile backend</em> must be
+  <sys its:translate="no">dconf</sys> <em>keyfile back end</em> must be
   used.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Edit the <file its:translate="no">/etc/dconf/profile/user</file> file
-      on every client. If one does not already exist, create it.</p>
+      <p>Create or edit the <file its:translate="no">/etc/dconf/profile/user</file> file
+      on every client.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Add a line containing
-      <code><input its:translate="no">service-db:keyfile/user</input></code> to
-      the file and save your changes.</p>
+      <p>At the very beginning of this file, add the following line:</p>
+      <code><input its:translate="no">service-db:keyfile/user</input></code>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
@@ -58,7 +64,7 @@
     <p>In-process changes will take effect imediately, but out-of-process
     changes will be delayed by the poll time on GFileMonitor.</p>
   </comment>
-  <p>The <sys its:translate="no">dconf</sys> <em>keyfile backend</em> will only
+  <p>The <sys its:translate="no">dconf</sys> <em>keyfile back end</em> will only
   take effect the next time that the user logs in. It polls the keyfile to
   determine whether updates have been made, so settings may not be updated
   imediately.</p>
@@ -68,7 +74,7 @@
     <p>According to Ryan, "SIGBUS being semi-randomly delivered to your
     processes is a real downer". This means stuff will crash.</p>
   </comment>
-  <p>If a <em>keyfile backend</em> is not used, the user settings may not be
+  <p>If a <em>keyfile back end</em> is not used, the user settings may not be
   retrieved or updated correctly.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/system-admin-guide/Makefile.am b/system-admin-guide/Makefile.am
index aa64d70..ca89e95 100644
--- a/system-admin-guide/Makefile.am
+++ b/system-admin-guide/Makefile.am
@@ -3,7 +3,6 @@
 HELP_ID = system-admin-guide
 
 HELP_FILES = \
-       backgrounds-extra.page          \
        dconf-custom-defaults.page      \
        dconf-keyfiles.page             \
        dconf-lockdown.page             \