[gnome-user-docs] updates to sysadmin index and dconf.page. dconf.page still incomplete

[Jim Campbell <jcampbell src gnome org>]

commit 3bb963fd7ea84afe148b7a94aef130e091e63ab9
Author: Jim Campbell <jcampbell gnome org>
Date:   Wed Jun 18 12:05:16 2014 -0400

    updates to sysadmin index and dconf.page. dconf.page still incomplete

 system-admin-guide/C/dconf.page |   26 +++++++++++++++++++----
 system-admin-guide/C/index.page |   42 ++++++++++++++++++++------------------
 2 files changed, 43 insertions(+), 25 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/system-admin-guide/C/dconf.page b/system-admin-guide/C/dconf.page
index 4c6a30d..6054f3e 100644
--- a/system-admin-guide/C/dconf.page
+++ b/system-admin-guide/C/dconf.page
@@ -6,6 +6,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#user"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-08-08" status="incomplete"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-06-17" status="incomplete"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
@@ -17,19 +18,34 @@
       <email its:translate="no">desrt desrt ca</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="author copyright">
+      <name>Jim Campbell</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">jcampbell gnome org</email>
+      <years>2014</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
     <desc>What is <sys>dconf</sys>? How can it be used to edit configurations?</desc>
   </info>
 
-  <title>User and system settings</title>
+  <title>Manage user and system settings with dconf</title>
 
   <!-- TODO: improve wording throughout the page -->
-  <p><sys>dconf</sys> is a key-based configuration system which manages user
-  settings. It is the backend for <sys>GSettings</sys>. <sys>dconf</sys>
-  manages a range of different settings, including <sys>GDM</sys>, application
-  and proxy settings.</p>
+  <p><sys>dconf</sys> is one of the main configuration utilities in GNOME. Its
+  purpose is to help you set and manage GNOME system and application
+  settings.</p>
+
+  <p>To give you an idea of the power of <sys>dconf</sys> within GNOME, a
+  <sys>dconf</sys> key exists for most every setting that a user can click on
+  in the GNOME desktop or in any GNOME application. In addition to this, there
+  are some system and application settings that can't even be changed from
+  within the user interface, but which <em>can</em> be changed by using
+  <sys>dconf</sys>.</p>
+
+  <p>As an administrator, this means that knowing how to use <sys>dconf</sys>
+  will help you to customize GNOME and GNOME-based applications to best suit
+  the needs of your particular environment.</p>
 
   <!-- TODO: changes are written to the first database in the list, but
        multiple databases can be writable. -->
diff --git a/system-admin-guide/C/index.page b/system-admin-guide/C/index.page
index 6b195d3..1051f90 100644
--- a/system-admin-guide/C/index.page
+++ b/system-admin-guide/C/index.page
@@ -1,9 +1,11 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="guide"
       id="index">
 
   <info>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2012-08-09" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-06-16" status="draft"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Matthias Clasen</name>
@@ -29,32 +31,32 @@
     <desc>A guide for GNOME 3 system administrators</desc>
   </info>
 
-<title>GNOME Desktop System Administration Guide</title>
+  <title>GNOME Desktop System Administration Guide</title>
 
-<links style="norwich" type="topic"
+  <links style="norwich" type="topic"
        groups="user-settings appearance #first #default #last"/>
 
-<section style="toronto" id="user">
-  <title>User settings</title>
-</section>
+  <section style="toronto" id="user">
+    <title>User settings</title>
+  </section>
 
-<section style="toronto" id="appearance">
-  <title>Default appearance</title>
-</section>
+  <section style="toronto" id="appearance">
+    <title>Default appearance</title>
+  </section>
 
-<section style="toronto" id="extension">
-  <title>GNOME Shell extensions</title>
-</section>
+  <section style="toronto" id="extension">
+    <title>GNOME Shell extensions</title>
+  </section>
 
-<section style="toronto" id="session">
-  <title>Session management</title>
-</section>
+  <section style="toronto" id="session">
+    <title>Session management</title>
+  </section>
 
-<section style="toronto" id="net">
-  <title>Network</title>
-</section>
+  <section style="toronto" id="net">
+    <title>Network</title>
+  </section>
 
-<!--section type="topic" style="toronto" id="prob">
-  <title>Troubleshooting</title>
-</section-->
+  <!--section type="topic" style="toronto" id="prob">
+    <title>Troubleshooting</title>
+  </section-->
 </page>