[gnome-user-docs] Update processes.page



commit 17994f03b3ce082f671c1c7ad15a1daa7315574b
Author: Petr Kovar <pkovar redhat com>
Date:   Tue Jun 17 15:57:38 2014 -0400

    Update processes.page

 system-admin-guide/C/processes.page |   49 ++++++++++++++++++----------------
 system-admin-guide/C/software.page  |    5 +++
 2 files changed, 31 insertions(+), 23 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/system-admin-guide/C/processes.page b/system-admin-guide/C/processes.page
index 3acb55b..8508551 100644
--- a/system-admin-guide/C/processes.page
+++ b/system-admin-guide/C/processes.page
@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@
       id="processes">
 
   <info>
-    <link type="guide" xref="index#session" />
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-07-02" status="draft"/>
+    <link type="guide" xref="software#management" />
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-06-17" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Matthias Clasen</name>
@@ -20,6 +20,10 @@
       <name>Aruna Sankaranarayanan</name>
       <email>aruna evam gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Petr Kovar</name>
+      <email>pknbe volny cz</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <desc>Which processes should I expect to see running in a pristine, stock
      GNOME session?</desc>
@@ -28,19 +32,18 @@
   <title>Typical processes</title>
 
   <p>In a stock <app>GNOME</app> session, programs called
-  <link href="man:daemon"><app>daemon</app></link> run on the system as
+  <link href="man:daemon"><app>daemons</app></link> run on the system as
   background processes. You should find the following daemons running by
   default:</p>
 
    <terms>
      <item>
        <title>dbus-daemon</title>
-       <p>D-Bus is a library that provides one-to-one communication between any
-       two applications. The <app>dbus-daemon</app> is a program that uses the
-       D-Bus library to implement a message bus daemon. Multiple programs can
-       connect to the message bus daemon and exchange messages with one
-       another.</p>
-       <p>For extended information, consider reading the manual page for
+       <p> The <app>dbus-daemon</app> provides a message bus daemon which
+       programs can use to exchange messages with one another.
+       <app>dbus-daemon</app> is implemented with the D-Bus library which
+       provides one-to-one communication between any two applications.</p>
+       <p>For extended information, see the manual page for
        <link href="man:dbus-daemon">dbus-daemon</link>.</p>
      </item>
      <item>
@@ -49,18 +52,18 @@
        websites are stored securely using the <app>gnome-keyring-daemon</app>.
        This information is written into an encrypted file called the keyring
        file and saved in the user's home directory.</p>
-       <p>For extended information, consider reading the manual page for
+       <p>For extended information, see the manual page for
        <link href="man:gnome-keyring-daemon">gnome-keyring-daemon</link>.</p>
      </item>
      <item>
        <title>gnome-session</title>
        <p>The <app>gnome-session</app> program is responsible for running the
        GNOME desktop environment with help of a display manager such as
-       <app>GDM</app>, <app>LightDM</app>, <app>NODM</app> and so on. The
+       <app>GDM</app>, <app>LightDM</app>, or <app>NODM</app>. The
        default session for the user is set at the time of system installation
        by the system administrator. <app>gnome-session</app> typically loads
        the last session that ran successfully on the system.</p>
-       <p>For extended information, consider reading the manual page for
+       <p>For extended information, see the manual page for
        <link href="man:gnome-session">gnome-session</link>.</p>
      </item>
      <item>
@@ -68,7 +71,7 @@
        <p>The <app>gnome-settings-daemon</app> handles settings for a
        GNOME session and for all programs that are run within the
        session.</p>
-       <p>For extended information, consider reading the manual page for
+       <p>For extended information, see the manual page for
        <link href="man:gnome-settings-daemon">gnome-settings-daemon</link>.</p>
      </item>
      <item>
@@ -76,7 +79,7 @@
        <p><app>gnome-shell</app> provides the core user interface functionality
        for GNOME such as launching programs, browsing directories,
        viewing files and so on.</p>
-       <p>For extended information, consider reading the
+       <p>For extended information, see the
        manual page for <link href="man:gnome-shell">gnome-shell</link>.</p>
      </item>
      <item>
@@ -84,7 +87,7 @@
        <p><app>PulseAudio</app> is a sound server for Linux, POSIX and Windows
        systems that lets programs output audio via the <app>Pulseaudio</app>
        daemon.</p>
-       <p>For extended information, consider reading the manual page for
+       <p>For extended information, see the manual page for
        <link href="man:pulseaudio">pulseaudio</link>.</p>
      </item>
    </terms>
@@ -93,14 +96,14 @@
   following, among others:</p>
    <list ui:expanded="false">
    <title>Additional Processes</title>
-     <item><p>at-spi2-dbus-launcher</p></item>
-     <item><p>at-spi2-registryd</p></item>
-     <item><p>gnome-screensaver</p></item>
-     <item><p>gnome-shell-calendar-server</p></item>
-     <item><p>goa-daemon</p></item>
-     <item><p>gsd-printer</p></item>
-     <item><p>various Evolution factory processes</p></item>
-     <item><p>various GVFS processes</p></item>
+     <item><p><app>at-spi2-dbus-launcher</app></p></item>
+     <item><p><app>at-spi2-registryd</app></p></item>
+     <item><p><app>gnome-screensaver</app></p></item>
+     <item><p><app>gnome-shell-calendar-server</app></p></item>
+     <item><p><app>goa-daemon</app></p></item>
+     <item><p><app>gsd-printer</app></p></item>
+     <item><p>various <app>Evolution</app> factory processes</p></item>
+     <item><p>various <app>GVFS</app> processes</p></item>
    </list>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/system-admin-guide/C/software.page b/system-admin-guide/C/software.page
index eb12860..db59551 100644
--- a/system-admin-guide/C/software.page
+++ b/system-admin-guide/C/software.page
@@ -10,4 +10,9 @@
 
   <title>Software</title>
 
+<section id="management">
+  <title>Management</title>
+  <links style="2column" type="topic"/>
+</section>
+
 </page>


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