[evolution/help-reorder] Edit the assistant page by rephrasing IMAP and POP description.



commit f42a16595f684c09b88493c519148290ab70e7fa
Author: Julita Inca <jinca gnome org>
Date:   Thu Jul 31 22:23:21 2014 +0100

    Edit the assistant page by rephrasing IMAP and POP description.

 help/C/assistant.page |   32 ++++++++++++++++++++------------
 1 files changed, 20 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/assistant.page b/help/C/assistant.page
index f7dd9a4..cb68e71 100644
--- a/help/C/assistant.page
+++ b/help/C/assistant.page
@@ -28,16 +28,19 @@
 
   <section id="restore-backup">
   <title>Restore from a backup file</title>
-       <p>Check <gui>Restore from a backup file</gui>, in case you have a file to restore mailbox from 
previous version, 
-           then click on <gui>Continue</gui>. If you do not have a backup, click on <gui>Continue</gui>.</p>
+       <p>Check <gui>Restore from a backup file</gui>, in case you have a file to 
+           restore mailbox from previous version, then click on <gui>Continue</gui>. 
+           If you do not have a backup, click on <gui>Continue</gui>.</p>
   </section>
 
 <section id="identity">
   <title>Identity</title>
        <p>Enter your name and email address to identify yourself, then click on <gui>Continue</gui>.</p>
         <note>
-           <p>Optionally, register another email account on <gui>Reply-To</gui> if you want to send a copy 
of all the messages you send.</p> 
-           <p>Also you can enter the name of your organization. This lets you to group easily in the contact 
list.</p>    
+           <p>Optionally, register another email account on <gui>Reply-To</gui> 
+              if you want to send a copy of all the messages you send.</p> 
+           <p>Also you can enter the name of your organization. 
+              This lets you to group easily in the contact list.</p>    
         </note>  
 </section>
     
@@ -53,25 +56,29 @@
        </item>
        <item>
           <p>Exchange Web Services</p>
-         <p>Use this option, if your company allows you to use it. You may also sync your calendar, contacts 
and notes when you <link xref="exchange-receiving">configure it</link>.</p>
+         <p>Use this option, if your company allows you to use it. 
+             You may also sync your calendar, contacts and notes when 
+             you <link xref="exchange-receiving">configure it</link>.</p>
        </item>
        <item>
           <p>IMAP+</p>
          <p>You can use this option if you use an email service like Gmail, Hotmail, Yahoo or another one. 
              See how to <link xref="imap-receiving">configure it.</link></p>
           <note>
-              <p>If you have ordered your messages in folders in your mail inbox, IMAP will keep the 
structure 
-                 and will show your messages in the same order as you put them.</p>
-              <p>IMAP will also make an offline copy in your device, so you can access to your messages 
online from other multiple devices.</p>
+              <p>If you order your messages in folders in the inbox, IMAP will keep the same structure 
+                 to show your messages in the same order as you put them.</p>
+              <p>IMAP makes an offline copy in your device, so that you can access your messages when you 
are 
+                 online from other devices.</p>
           </note>  
        </item>
        <item>
           <p>POP</p>
-         <p>You can download your mail to your disk for permanent storage, freeing up space on the email 
server. 
+         <p>You can download your mail for permanent storage, freeing up space on the email server. 
              See how to <link xref="pop-receiving">configure it.</link></p>
          <note>
-              <p>You can use this option in case your email server gives you a small inbox space, 
-                 but remember that all your messages will be deleted from the email server. Make sure you 
have a backup of all your messages.</p>
+              <p>You can use this option in case your email server gives you a small inbox space.
+                 Once you download your messages, they will be deleted from the email server. 
+                 So, make sure you have a backup of all your messages.</p>
           </note>
       </item>
 
@@ -100,7 +107,8 @@
        </item>
        <item>
           <p>Sendmail</p>
-         <p>Use this option, if you know how to configure your own server mail and if your company allows 
you to use it.</p>
+         <p>Use this option, if you know how to configure your own server mail and 
+          if your company allows you to use it.</p>
        </item>
     </list>
   </section>


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