[evolution/help-reorder] Edit the sending mail part in simple words for users.



commit 996ba75b363daabb92ac771e538931c3ea48d692
Author: Julita Inca <jinca gnome org>
Date:   Wed Jul 30 22:21:48 2014 +0100

    Edit the sending mail part in simple words for users.

 help/C/add-account.page |    4 ++--
 help/C/assistant.page   |   14 +++++++++-----
 2 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/add-account.page b/help/C/add-account.page
index 256f89a..c4890be 100644
--- a/help/C/add-account.page
+++ b/help/C/add-account.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       type="topic" id="add-account">
 
   <info>
-    <desc>Add, edit or remove an account.</desc>
+    <desc>Add, edit or remove an email account.</desc>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="mail" group="#adding-account"/>
 
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
 
   </info>
 
-<title>Manage an account</title>
+<title>Account management</title>
 <p> Add an account.</p>
 
 
diff --git a/help/C/assistant.page b/help/C/assistant.page
index 0a06249..14f39ba 100644
--- a/help/C/assistant.page
+++ b/help/C/assistant.page
@@ -28,15 +28,16 @@
 
   <section id="restore-backup">
   <title>Restore from a backup file</title>
-       <p>Select your <gui>backup</gui> (if you have a file to do it), then click on <gui>Continue</gui>.</p>
+       <p>Select your <gui>backup</gui>, in case you have a file to restore mailbox from previous version, 
then click on <gui>Continue</gui>.
+           If you do not have a backup, click on <gui>Continue</gui>.</p>
   </section>
 
 <section id="identity">
   <title>Identity</title>
        <p>Enter your name and email address to identify yourself, then click on <gui>Continue</gui>.</p>
         <note>
-           <p>Optionally, register another email account on <gui>Reply-To</gui> if you want to copy all the 
messages you send to another account.</p> 
-           <p>The name of the organization you belong is also optional. It will appear the moment somebody 
import you as his/her contact.</p>    
+           <p>Optionally, register another email account on <gui>Reply-To</gui> if you want to copy all the 
messages you send.</p> 
+           <p>The name of the organization you belong is also optional. It will appear when somebody import 
you as his/her contact.</p>    
         </note>  
 </section>
     
@@ -92,11 +93,14 @@
           <p>The most commonly used options are:</p>
        <item>
           <p>SMTP</p>
-          <p>Use this protocol when you have configured <link xref="imap-sending">IMAP</link>, <link 
xref="pop-sending">POP</link>, <link xref="exchange-sending">Exchange</link> or another receiving email 
protocol.</p>
+          <p>This network protocol is used for transmitting your messages to an email server on Internet. 
+             Use this option if you have configured <link xref="imap-sending">IMAP</link>, <link 
xref="pop-sending">POP</link>, 
+             <link xref="exchange-sending">Exchange</link> or another receiving email protocol.</p>
+
        </item>
        <item>
           <p>Sendmail</p>
-         <p>Use this option, if your company allows you to use it.</p>
+         <p>Use this option, if you know how to configure your own server mail and if your company allows 
you to use it.</p>
        </item>
     </list>
   </section>


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