[evolution/help-reorder] Edit the assistant page. Spelling words and reprase the intro.



commit 2e1bac6a9e8f53f1c88d7a682c931875a7090ad1
Author: Julita Inca <jinca gnome org>
Date:   Wed Jul 30 20:06:45 2014 +0100

    Edit the assistant page. Spelling words and reprase the intro.

 help/C/add-account.page |    5 +++--
 help/C/assistant.page   |    9 +++++----
 2 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/add-account.page b/help/C/add-account.page
index eff5986..256f89a 100644
--- a/help/C/add-account.page
+++ b/help/C/add-account.page
@@ -8,7 +8,8 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="mail" group="#adding-account"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.10.2" version="0.5" date="2014-02-03" status="review"/>      
-    
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10.2" version="0.6" date="2014-08-30" status="review"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name its:translate="no">Julita Inca</name>
       <email its:translate="no">yrazes gmail com</email>
@@ -20,7 +21,7 @@
 
   </info>
 
-<title>Add an account</title>
+<title>Manage an account</title>
 <p> Add an account.</p>
 
 
diff --git a/help/C/assistant.page b/help/C/assistant.page
index 3196a72..0a06249 100644
--- a/help/C/assistant.page
+++ b/help/C/assistant.page
@@ -17,9 +17,10 @@
   </info>
 
   <title>Evolution Account Assistant</title>
-
-  <p>The assistant helps you configure your account. You need to add the following settings.</p>
-
+  <p>The first time you run <app>Evolution</app>, it opens the first-run assistant.
+     This assistant helps you to set up your email account and import data from other applications.
+     Follow the instructions in each window, accepting the default or recommended setting for each choice: 
+  </p>
   <section id="welcome">
   <title>Welcome</title>
        <p>Click <gui>Continue</gui> to pass the welcome message of the assistant.</p>
@@ -34,7 +35,7 @@
   <title>Identity</title>
        <p>Enter your name and email address to identify yourself, then click on <gui>Continue</gui>.</p>
         <note>
-           <p>Optinally, register another email account on <gui>Reply-To</gui> if you want to copy all the 
messages you send to another account.</p> 
+           <p>Optionally, register another email account on <gui>Reply-To</gui> if you want to copy all the 
messages you send to another account.</p> 
            <p>The name of the organization you belong is also optional. It will appear the moment somebody 
import you as his/her contact.</p>    
         </note>  
 </section>


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