[tali/mallard-help] Review commit: fix as asked in comments



commit 3b285ab4a613df049dc483438f9cbabb52b706c4
Author: Sindhu S <sindhus live in>
Date:   Wed Jul 9 00:27:34 2014 +0530

    Review commit: fix as asked in comments

 help/C/game-settings.page   |    3 +++
 help/C/play-game.page       |    2 +-
 help/C/players-setting.page |    3 ++-
 help/C/score-slot.page      |    1 +
 help/C/start-game.page      |    2 +-
 5 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/game-settings.page b/help/C/game-settings.page
index 6809baa..9092b41 100644
--- a/help/C/game-settings.page
+++ b/help/C/game-settings.page
@@ -21,6 +21,9 @@
   <p>You can play the regular version of the game which is similar to Yahtzee
   or the game with colors, similar to Kismet. To switch over to another version
   of the game:</p> 
+  <!-- check for trailing spaces -->
+  <!--The first sentence must be reworded to say "blah blah is the default game, to switch over to another 
gamae:" -->
+  <!-- Why is this in list!!! argh...rewrite using steps! -->
     <list>
       <item><p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Tali</gui>
       <gui style="menuitem">Preferences</gui></guiseq> from the application
diff --git a/help/C/play-game.page b/help/C/play-game.page
index 6044d85..ec7aca6 100644
--- a/help/C/play-game.page
+++ b/help/C/play-game.page
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
       type="topic"
       id="play-game">
-
+<!-- be consistent!! in klotski you have different arrangement of pages...like you say in klotski "start a 
new game" and here you say "play" -->
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
     <revision version="3.12" date="2014-06-13" status="review"/>
diff --git a/help/C/players-setting.page b/help/C/players-setting.page
index 23473f1..1f49b23 100644
--- a/help/C/players-setting.page
+++ b/help/C/players-setting.page
@@ -1,6 +1,7 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
       type="topic"
       id="players-setting">
+      <!-- just settings is fine, this page must go in advanced section on index -->
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
@@ -20,7 +21,7 @@
   
   <p>You can change the number of <gui>Human Players</gui> and <gui>Computer
   Opponents</gui>.</p>
-
+<!-- use steps!! -->
   <list>
     <item><p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Tali</gui>
     <gui style="menuitem">Preferences</gui></guiseq> from the application menu.
diff --git a/help/C/score-slot.page b/help/C/score-slot.page
index e777e96..6c2ae26 100644
--- a/help/C/score-slot.page
+++ b/help/C/score-slot.page
@@ -1,6 +1,7 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
       type="topic"
       id="score-slot">
+      <!--merge this page with scores please! -->
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
diff --git a/help/C/start-game.page b/help/C/start-game.page
index f21b020..1c3f7ca 100644
--- a/help/C/start-game.page
+++ b/help/C/start-game.page
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
       type="topic"
       id="start-game">
-
+<!-- merge this with play page -->
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
     <revision version="3.12" date="2014-06-11" status="review"/>


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