[foundation-web] Improve the text for Step 2/4.

[Tobias Mueller <tobiasmue src gnome org>]

commit fb77b56419d55c45f36bf9ff7d81c2e61edb1202
Author: Bradley M. Kuhn <bkuhn ebb org>
Date:   Mon Feb 10 17:41:31 2014 -0500

    Improve the text for Step 2/4.
    
    I'm trying to get a version of this text that is clear.  This is another
    attempt.

 foundation.gnome.org/vote/include/step2-choose.php |   10 +++++-----
 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/foundation.gnome.org/vote/include/step2-choose.php 
b/foundation.gnome.org/vote/include/step2-choose.php
index f6ab03b..d3780ad 100644
--- a/foundation.gnome.org/vote/include/step2-choose.php
+++ b/foundation.gnome.org/vote/include/step2-choose.php
@@ -8,14 +8,14 @@ function step2_do () {
 
   $result = "<h2>Step 2/4 - Choose your vote</h2>\n";
 
-  $result .= "<p>Clicking on a candidate in the Candidates box adds it in order to the Prefences box.";
-  $result .= "If you make an incorrect selection, click on the candidate in the Preferences box, and it will 
move back to the Candidates box.  Note: you may need to scroll down to see the Preferences box.</p>";
-  $result .= "Once you have a Preferences box that you like, use the button at the bottom to continue to the 
next step.  You can review and confirm";
-  $result .= " your ballot on the next page.</p>";
-
   $result .= "<p>You can vote for as few or as many candidates as you choose. ";
   $result .= "An <a href=\"http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Single_transferable_vote\";>STV algorithm</a> will be 
used to count your votes.</p>";
 
+  $result .= "<p>Clicking on a candidate in the <em>Candidates</em> box adds it in order to the Prefences 
box.  ";
+  $result .= "If you want to change a selection you've already made, you can click on the candidate in the 
<em>Preferences</em> box, and that candidate will move back to the <em>Candidates</em> box.  (Note: you may 
need to scroll down to see the <em>Preferences</em> box).</p>";
+  $result .= "<p>Once you have a <em>Preferences</em> box that you like, use the button at the bottom to 
continue to the next step.  You can review and confirm";
+  $result .= " your ballot on the next page.</p>";
+
   $result .= "<p><noscript>Note: This page requires Javascript</noscript></p>";
 
   $result .= "<div class=\"canddata\">\n";