[gnome-user-docs] Update shell-introduction.page



commit 3310d37172b2436247a24750c4f7eb3e2023789b
Author: Petr Kovar <pkovar redhat com>
Date:   Wed Jan 29 11:29:52 2014 +0000

    Update shell-introduction.page

 gnome-help/C/gnome-classic.page      |   30 +++++++++++++++++++++---------
 gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page |   15 ++++++++++-----
 2 files changed, 31 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/gnome-classic.page b/gnome-help/C/gnome-classic.page
index b9635cd..5e115b5 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/gnome-classic.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/gnome-classic.page
@@ -25,19 +25,31 @@
 
 <title>What is GNOME Classic?</title>
 
+<if:choose>
+  <if:when test="!platform:gnome-classic">
+  <p><em>GNOME Classic</em> is a feature for users who prefer a more traditional
+  desktop experience. While <em>GNOME Classic</em> is based on <em>GNOME 3</em>
+  technologies, it provides a number of changes to the user interface, such as
+  the <gui>Applications</gui> and
+  <gui>Places</gui> menus on the top bar, and a window
+  list at the bottom of the screen.</p>
+  </if:when>
+  <if:when test="platform:gnome-classic">
 <p><em>GNOME Classic</em> is a feature for users who prefer a more traditional
- desktop experience. While <em>GNOME Classic</em> is based on <em>GNOME 3</em>
- technologies, it provides a number of changes to the user interface, such as
- the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Applications</gui> and
- <gui xref="shell-terminology">Places</gui> menus on the top bar, and a window
- list at the bottom of the screen.</p>
-
-<p>You can use the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Applications</gui> menu on the
- top bar to launch applications. The <em xref="shell-terminology">
+  desktop experience. While <em>GNOME Classic</em> is based on <em>GNOME 3</em>
+  technologies, it provides a number of changes to the user interface, such as
+  the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Applications</gui> and
+  <gui xref="shell-terminology">Places</gui> menus on the top bar, and a window
+  list at the bottom of the screen.</p>
+  </if:when>
+</if:choose>
+
+<p>You can use the <gui>Applications</gui> menu on the top bar to launch
+ applications. The <em xref="shell-terminology">
  <gui>Activities</gui> overview</em> is available by selecting the <gui>Activities
  Overview</gui> item from the menu.</p>
 
-<p>To access the <em xref="shell-terminology"><gui>Activities</gui> overview</em>,
+<p>To access the <em><gui>Activities</gui> overview</em>,
  you can also press the <key xref="keyboard-key-super">Super</key> key.</p>
 
 <section id="gnome-classic-window-list">
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page
index 4a0ccf4..c620132 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page
@@ -134,20 +134,25 @@
       height="132" style="floatend floatright" if:test="!target:mobile">
         <p>App Menu of <app>Terminal</app></p>
       </media>
+      <p>Application menu, located beside the <gui>Activities</gui> button,
+      shows the name of the active application alongside with its icon and
+      provides quick access to application preferences or help. The items that
+      are available in the application menu vary depending on the application.
+      </p>
     </if:when>
     <if:when test="platform:gnome-classic">
       <media type="image" src="figures/shell-appmenu-classic.png" width="154"
       height="133" style="floatend floatright" if:test="!target:mobile">
         <p>App Menu of <app>Terminal</app></p>
       </media>
+      <p>Application menu, located next to the <gui>Applications</gui> and
+      <gui>Places</gui> menus, shows the name of the active application
+      alongside with its icon and provides quick access to application
+      preferences or help. The items that are available in the application menu
+      vary depending on the application.</p>
     </if:when>
   </if:choose>
 
-  <p>Application menu, located beside the <gui>Activities</gui> button shows the name
-  of the active application alongside with its icon and provides quick access to
-  application preferences or help. The items that are available in the
-  application menu vary depending on the application.</p>
-
 </section>
 
 <section id="clock">


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