[bijiben] Help: review and update to 3.11



commit 399e4e77b0e77271aff34cdb0b349bbd9ca491c8
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill gnome org>
Date:   Tue Jan 28 18:54:34 2014 +0000

    Help: review and update to 3.11

 help/C/colors.page                             |   30 ++++++++++++++---------
 help/C/create.page                             |   22 ++++++++++------
 help/C/cut-copy-paste.page                     |   12 +++++++-
 help/C/delete.page                             |   29 +++++++++++++---------
 help/C/formatting.page                         |   10 ++++++-
 help/C/index.page                              |    2 +
 help/C/introduction.page                       |   16 +++++++----
 help/C/listing.page                            |   11 +++++++-
 help/C/notebooks.page                          |   31 ++++++++++++++----------
 help/C/rename.page                             |   18 +++++++++++--
 help/C/search.page                             |   17 ++++++++----
 help/C/share.page                              |   13 +++++++--
 help/C/{undo-redo.page => undo-redo.page.stub} |    6 ++++
 help/Makefile.am                               |    1 -
 14 files changed, 148 insertions(+), 70 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/colors.page b/help/C/colors.page
index ab933dc..969e1e3 100644
--- a/help/C/colors.page
+++ b/help/C/colors.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#use"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-05-04" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.11" date="2014-01-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Pierre-Yves Luyten</name>
@@ -21,6 +21,11 @@
       <email its:translate="no">tyagishobha gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2014</years>
+    </credit>
     
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -29,34 +34,35 @@
 
   <title>Change note color</title>
 
-  <p>To change the color of an individual note:</p> 
-
   <steps>
+    <title>To change the color of an individual note:</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Open a note.</p>
+      <p>Click on the note to open it.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Press the <gui style="button">Note color</gui> button.</p>
+      <p>Click the <gui style="button">Note color</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select a new color and press <gui style="button">Select</gui> button.</p>
+      <p>Select a new color and click the
+      <gui style="button">Select</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
   
-  <p>To change the color of multiple notes, in the <em>New and Recent:</em></p>
-
   <steps>
+    <title>To change the color of multiple notes:</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Press the <gui style="button">selection mode</gui> button.</p>
+      <p>In the <gui>New and Recent</gui> view, click the
+      <gui style="button">Selection mode</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select the notes which you want to change.</p>
+      <p>Select the notes you want to change.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Press <gui style="button">Note color</gui> button.</p>
+      <p>Click the <gui style="button">Note color</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select a new color and press <gui style="button">Select</gui> button.</p>
+      <p>Select a new color and click the
+      <gui style="button">Select</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
  
diff --git a/help/C/create.page b/help/C/create.page
index 1172284..2fc4c7e 100644
--- a/help/C/create.page
+++ b/help/C/create.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#create"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-04-29" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.11" date="2014-01-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Pierre-Yves Luyten</name>
@@ -21,10 +21,16 @@
       <email its:translate="no">tyagishobha gmail com</email>
       <years>2014</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2014</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>Create a new note from scratch, using some text from another application or from another 
note.</desc>
+    <desc>Create a new note from scratch, using some text from another
+    application or from another note.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Create a note</title>
@@ -32,17 +38,17 @@
   <p>You can create a new note in three different ways:</p>
   <list>
     <item>
-      <p>Press the <gui style="button">New</gui> button to create a blank
+      <p>Click the <gui style="button">New</gui> button to create a blank
       note.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Drag and drop text to the <em>New and Recent</em> to create a note
-      containing this text.</p>
+      <p>Drag and drop text to the <gui>New and Recent</gui> view to create a
+      note containing this text.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Open a note, select some text and press the
-      <gui style="button">Link</gui> button to create a note containing this
-      text.</p>
+      <p>Open a note, select some text and click the
+      <gui style="button">Copy selection to a new note</gui> button to create a
+      note containing this text.</p>
     </item>
   </list>
 
diff --git a/help/C/cut-copy-paste.page b/help/C/cut-copy-paste.page
index 5a64590..4fc51a4 100644
--- a/help/C/cut-copy-paste.page
+++ b/help/C/cut-copy-paste.page
@@ -5,12 +5,18 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#use"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.11" date="2014-01-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shobha Tyagi</name>
       <email its:translate="no">tyagishobha gmail com</email>
       <years>2014</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2014</years>
+    </credit>
  
    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -20,11 +26,13 @@
   <title>Cut, copy and paste</title>
 
   <steps>
+    <title>To cut, copy or paste in a note:</title>
     <item>
       <p>Select the text.</p>
     </item>
-    <item><p>Press <gui style="button">Cut</gui>,
-    <gui style="button">Copy</gui> or <gui style="button">Paste</gui>.</p>
+    <item><p>Click <gui style="button">Cut</gui>,
+    <gui style="button">Copy</gui>
+    or <gui style="button">Paste</gui>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
diff --git a/help/C/delete.page b/help/C/delete.page
index cd7d958..62a283c 100644
--- a/help/C/delete.page
+++ b/help/C/delete.page
@@ -5,8 +5,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#delete"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-05-04" status="review"/>
-
+    <revision pkgversion="3.11" date="2014-01-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Pierre-Yves Luyten</name>
@@ -22,35 +21,41 @@
       <email its:translate="no">tyagishobha gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2014</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>Delete unwanted and old notes.</desc>
+    <desc>Delete old and unwanted notes.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Delete a note</title>
 
-  <p>To delete a note:</p>
-
   <steps>
+    <title>To delete a note:</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Open a note.</p>
+      <p>Click on the note to open it.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="button">More
-      options…</gui><gui style="menuitem">Move to Trash</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+      <p>Select
+      <guiseq><gui style="button">More options…</gui><gui style="menuitem">Move to Trash</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
-  <p>To delete multiple notes and notebooks, in the <em>New and Recent</em>:</p>
+
   <steps>
+    <title>To delete multiple notes and notebooks:</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Press the <gui style="button">selection mode</gui> button.</p>
+      <p>In the <gui>New and Recent</gui> view, click the
+      <gui style="button">Selection mode</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select the notes and the notebooks that you want to delete.</p>
+      <p>Select the notes and the notebooks you want to delete.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Press the <gui style="button">Move to Trash</gui> button.</p>
+      <p>Click the <gui style="button">Move to Trash</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/formatting.page b/help/C/formatting.page
index d8799af..1e3c665 100644
--- a/help/C/formatting.page
+++ b/help/C/formatting.page
@@ -5,6 +5,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#use"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.11" date="2014-01-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Pierre-Yves Luyten</name>
@@ -20,6 +21,11 @@
       <email its:translate="no">tyagishobha gmail com</email>
       <years>2014</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2014</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -28,13 +34,13 @@
 
   <title>Change the text style</title>
 
-  <p>You can format your note as follows:</p>
   <steps>
+    <title>To change the formatting options of text in your note:</title>
     <item>
       <p>Select the text that you want to format.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Press <gui style="button">Bold</gui>, <gui style="button">Italic</gui>
+      <p>Click <gui style="button">Bold</gui>, <gui style="button">Italic</gui>
       or <gui style="button">Strike</gui>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 34fbbc8..966ed3e 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -7,6 +7,8 @@
     <title type="text">Notes</title>
     <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-04-29" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-07-23" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.11" date="2014-01-28" status="final"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Pierre-Yves Luyten</name>
       <email its:translate="no">py luyten fr</email>
diff --git a/help/C/introduction.page b/help/C/introduction.page
index 93793ab..3766b8c 100644
--- a/help/C/introduction.page
+++ b/help/C/introduction.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index" group="#first"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-07-23" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.11" date="2014-01-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shobha Tyagi</name>
@@ -17,19 +17,23 @@
       <email its:translate="no">py luyten fr</email>
       <years>2012</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2014</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
     <desc>A simple application for creating, editing and viewing notes.</desc>
   </info>
 
-  <title>
-    Introduction to Notes
-  </title>
+  <title>Introduction to Notes</title>
 
   <p><app>Notes</app> is a simple application for creating, editing, and
-  viewing notes. You can search for a note from the <gui>Activities</gui>
-  overview too. <app>Notes</app> integrates easily with the online accounts.</p>
+  viewing notes. You can also search for a note from the <gui>Activities</gui>
+  overview. <app>Notes</app> integrates easily with
+  <app>Online Accounts</app>.</p>
 
   <media type="image" mime="image/png" src="figures/notes-scr.png"/>
 
diff --git a/help/C/listing.page b/help/C/listing.page
index f8da11d..3b2b890 100644
--- a/help/C/listing.page
+++ b/help/C/listing.page
@@ -5,6 +5,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#use"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.11" date="2014-01-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Pierre-Yves Luyten</name>
@@ -20,6 +21,11 @@
       <email its:translate="no">tyagishobha gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2014</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -29,13 +35,14 @@
   <title>Create a list</title>
 
   <list>
+    <title>While the note is open:</title>
     <item>
-      <p>To create an unordered list select
+      <p>To create an unordered list, click
       <guiseq><gui style="button">More options…</gui>
       <gui style="menuitem">Bullets</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>To create an ordered list select
+      <p>To create an ordered list, click
       <guiseq><gui style="button">More options…</gui>
       <gui>Numbered List</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
diff --git a/help/C/notebooks.page b/help/C/notebooks.page
index d4a7836..876f2a6 100644
--- a/help/C/notebooks.page
+++ b/help/C/notebooks.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#use"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-05-01" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.11" date="2014-01-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Pierre-Yves Luyten</name>
@@ -21,6 +21,11 @@
       <email its:translate="no">tyagishobha gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2014</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -29,42 +34,42 @@
 
   <title>Notebooks</title>
 
-  <p>To create a notebook with a single note:</p>
-
   <steps>
+    <title>To create a notebook with a single note:</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Open a note.</p>
+      <p>Click on the note to open it.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <guiseq><gui style="button">More
-      options…</gui><gui style="menuitem">Notebooks</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+      <p>Click
+      <guiseq><gui style="button">More options…</gui><gui style="menuitem">Notebooks</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Type a suitable name for the notebook and press
+      <p>Type a suitable name for the notebook and click the
       <gui style="button">New notebook</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Press the <gui style="button">Close</gui> button.</p>
+      <p>Click the <gui style="button">Close</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
-  <p>To create a notebook having multiple notes:</p>
+
   <steps>
+    <title>To create a notebook with multiple notes:</title>
     <item>
-      <p>In the <em>New and Recent</em>, press the
+      <p>In the <gui>New and Recent</gui> view, click the
       <gui style="button">Selection mode</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Select all the notes which you want to add to the notebook.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Press the <gui style="button">Notebooks</gui> button.</p>
+      <p>Click the <gui style="button">Notebooks</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Type a suitable name for the notebook and press
+      <p>Type a suitable name for the notebook and click
       <gui style="button">New notebook</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Press the <gui style="button">Close</gui> button.</p>
+      <p>Click the <gui style="button">Close</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
diff --git a/help/C/rename.page b/help/C/rename.page
index 4dfb741..4f2707d 100644
--- a/help/C/rename.page
+++ b/help/C/rename.page
@@ -5,13 +5,18 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#create"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-08-11" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.11" date="2014-01-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shobha Tyagi</name>
       <email its:translate="no">tyagishobha gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2014</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -20,6 +25,13 @@
 
   <title>Rename a note</title>
 
-  <p>To rename a note, change the first row in the text area.</p>
-
+  <steps>
+    <title>To rename a note:</title>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on the note to open it.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Change the text in the first line of the note.</p>
+    </item>
+  </steps>
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/search.page b/help/C/search.page
index ad66d5d..995a3ac 100644
--- a/help/C/search.page
+++ b/help/C/search.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#create"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-05-04" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.11" date="2014-01-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Pierre-Yves Luyten</name>
@@ -21,6 +21,11 @@
       <email its:translate="no">tyagishobha gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2014</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -29,19 +34,19 @@
 
   <title>Find a note</title>
 
-  <p>The default <em>New and Recent</em> shows the recently used notes.</p>
+  <p>The default <em>New and Recent</em> view shows recently used notes.</p>
 
-  <p>You can find notes while in the <em>New and Recent</em> using the following method:</p>
   <steps>
+  <title>To find notes while in <em>New and Recent</em>:</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Press the <gui>Search</gui> button.</p>
+      <p>Click the <gui>Search</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Type your search term and you can view all the search results instantly.</p>
+      <p>Type your search term. Search results will appear instantly.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
-  <note><p>You can also search for notes from the <gui>Activities</gui> view.</p></note>
+  <note><p>You can also search for notes from the <gui>Activities</gui> overview.</p></note>
 
   <!-- TODO talk about sorting notes by colour -->
 
diff --git a/help/C/share.page b/help/C/share.page
index 35a4373..0f1b2af 100644
--- a/help/C/share.page
+++ b/help/C/share.page
@@ -5,6 +5,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#use"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.11" date="2014-01-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Pierre-Yves Luyten</name>
@@ -20,6 +21,11 @@
       <email its:translate="no">tyagishobha gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2014</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -29,15 +35,16 @@
   <title>Share a note</title>
 
   <steps>
+    <title>To share a note:</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Open a note.</p>
+      <p>Click on the note to open it.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on the <gui style="button">Share note</gui> button.
+      <p>Click the <gui style="button">Share note</gui> button.
       Your default email client will start up.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Send the note by an email.</p>
+      <p>Send the note by email.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
diff --git a/help/C/undo-redo.page b/help/C/undo-redo.page.stub
similarity index 82%
rename from help/C/undo-redo.page
rename to help/C/undo-redo.page.stub
index e6ce254..22043d3 100644
--- a/help/C/undo-redo.page
+++ b/help/C/undo-redo.page.stub
@@ -5,12 +5,18 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#use"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.11" date="2014-01-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shobha Tyagi</name>
       <email its:translate="no">tyagishobha gmail com</email>
       <years>2014</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2014</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
diff --git a/help/Makefile.am b/help/Makefile.am
index 0294a62..ab0f6c4 100755
--- a/help/Makefile.am
+++ b/help/Makefile.am
@@ -17,7 +17,6 @@ HELP_FILES = \
        share.page \
        index.page \
        listing.page \
-       undo-redo.page \
        cut-copy-paste.page \
        legal.xml
 


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