[evolution] User docs: Improve introduction sentence (as proposed by Julita)

[Andre Klapper <aklapper src gnome org>]

commit 51b8e9a59b8c1c633ef5da6155ba07fb16ead5d0
Author: Andre Klapper <a9016009 gmx de>
Date:   Sat Jan 25 23:46:38 2014 +0100

    User docs: Improve introduction sentence (as proposed by Julita)

 help/C/intro-application.page |    4 ++--
 1 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/intro-application.page b/help/C/intro-application.page
index 5673f8e..3c515b1 100644
--- a/help/C/intro-application.page
+++ b/help/C/intro-application.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 
      <link type="guide" xref="index#getting-started"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8.2" version="0.3" date="2013-06-20" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10.3" version="0.4" date="2014-01-25" status="draft"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name its:translate="no">Brian Grohe</name>
       <email its:translate="no">grohe43 gmail com</email>
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
   </info>
 
 <title>Getting Started</title>
-<p>Evolution is a stable and versatile personal information manager for the GNOME project. Evolution allows 
you to keep your calendars, mail, address books and tasks in one place.</p>
+<p>Evolution allows you to access your personal information like your calendars, mail, address books and 
tasks in one place.</p>
 
 <p>By default Evolution opens the mail view. This is were you can view all your mail. You can change to 
other views of the application by going to the bottom of the left pane in the window (the so-called 
"switcher") and selecting the desired view. <link xref="intro-main-window">Learn more about the elements of 
the main window.</link></p>