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[gnome-user-docs] Review Contacts for 3.12

commit 731b86f36b88cfb8490a478e32471ca232d05d38
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Wed Feb 26 21:30:59 2014 +0000

    Review Contacts for 3.12

 gnome-help/C/contacts-add-remove.page   |    9 ++++---
 gnome-help/C/contacts-connect.page      |   16 +++++++-------
 gnome-help/C/contacts-edit-details.page |   20 +++---------------
 gnome-help/C/contacts-link-unlink.page  |    5 ++-
 gnome-help/C/contacts-search.page       |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/contacts-setup.page        |   32 +++++++++++++-----------------
 6 files changed, 35 insertions(+), 48 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/contacts-add-remove.page b/gnome-help/C/contacts-add-remove.page
index 3e88771..1164433 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/contacts-add-remove.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/contacts-add-remove.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="contacts"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" date="2012-08-13" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-04-27" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-02-26" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Lucie Hankey</name>
@@ -33,12 +34,12 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Press <gui style="button">New</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Press the <gui style="button">+</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>In the <gui>New contact</gui> window, enter the contact name and the
-      desired information. Click on the menu next to each field to choose
-      <gui>Work</gui>, <gui>Home</gui> or <gui>Other</gui>.</p>
+      <p>In the <gui>New contact</gui> dialog, enter the contact name and their
+      information. Click on the drop down box next to each field to chose the
+      type of detail.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Press <gui style="button">Create Contact</gui>.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/contacts-connect.page b/gnome-help/C/contacts-connect.page
index 1709559..afcb476 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/contacts-connect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/contacts-connect.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" date="2012-08-14" status="draft"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-04-27" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-02-26" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
@@ -17,7 +18,7 @@
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
       <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
-      <years>2013</years>
+      <years>2013-2014</years>
     </credit>
 
     <desc>Email, chat with, or phone a contact.</desc>
@@ -25,12 +26,6 @@
 
   <title>Connect with your contact</title>
 
-  <comment>
-    <cite date="2012-08-14" href="mailto:mdhill src gnome org">Michael Hill</cite>
-    <p>This assumes the reader knows how to…. By the end of this page,
-    the reader will be able to….</p>
-  </comment>
-
   <p>To email, chat with or phone someone in <app>Contacts</app>:</p>
 
   <steps>
@@ -38,7 +33,7 @@
       <p>Select the contact from your contact list.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Press on the <gui>Detail</gui> that you want to use. For example, to
+      <p>Press on the <em>detail</em> that you want to use. For example, to
       email your contact, press the email address.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
@@ -47,4 +42,9 @@
     </item>
   </steps>
 
+  <note>
+    <p>If there is no available application for the detail that you wish to
+    use, you will not be able to select it.</p>
+  </note>
+
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/contacts-edit-details.page b/gnome-help/C/contacts-edit-details.page
index 7abe8ff..b618bf8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/contacts-edit-details.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/contacts-edit-details.page
@@ -7,7 +7,8 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="contacts"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" date="2012-08-13" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8  " date="2013-04-27" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-04-27" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-02-26" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
@@ -42,8 +43,8 @@
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Edit the contact details.</p>
-      <p>To add a <gui>detail</gui> such as a new phone number or email
-      address, press <gui style="button">Add Detail</gui> and select the field
+      <p>To add a <em>detail</em> such as a new phone number or email
+      address, press <gui style="button">New Detail</gui> and select the field
       that you want to add.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
@@ -52,17 +53,4 @@
     </item>
   </steps>
 
-<note>
-  <p>In the case of linked contacts, you can edit a profile by clicking on the
-   profile's avatar.</p>
-</note>
-
-<comment>
-  <p></p>
-</comment>
-
-<!--
-
--->
-
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/contacts-link-unlink.page b/gnome-help/C/contacts-link-unlink.page
index 9806d9a..e307f5c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/contacts-link-unlink.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/contacts-link-unlink.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="contacts"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-04-27" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-02-26" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
@@ -29,7 +30,7 @@
 <title>Link and unlink contacts</title>
 
 <section id="link-contacts">
-<title>Link contacts</title>
+  <title>Link contacts</title>
 
   <p>You can combine duplicate contacts from your local address book and online
   accounts into one <app>Contacts</app> entry. This feature helps you keep your
@@ -53,7 +54,7 @@
 </section>
 
 <section id="unlink-contacts">
-<title>Unlink contacts</title>
+  <title>Unlink contacts</title>
 
   <p>You may want to unlink contacts if you accidentally linked contacts which
   should not be linked.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/contacts-search.page b/gnome-help/C/contacts-search.page
index 35242d0..90378b6 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/contacts-search.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/contacts-search.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="contacts"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" date="2012-08-13" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-02-26" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/contacts-setup.page b/gnome-help/C/contacts-setup.page
index 90d44d3..d6e956c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/contacts-setup.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/contacts-setup.page
@@ -1,14 +1,17 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="contacts-setup">
+
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="contacts" group="#first"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" date="2012-08-13" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-02-26" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
-      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
       <years>2012</years>
     </credit>
 
@@ -17,28 +20,21 @@
 
   <title>Starting Contacts for the first time</title>
 
-  <comment>
-    <cite date="2012-08-13" href="mailto:mdhillca gmail com">Michael Hill</cite>
-    <p>This assumes the reader knows how to…. By the end of this page,
-    the reader will be able to….</p>
-  </comment>
-
-  <p>When you run <app>Contacts</app> for the first time, the
-   <gui>Contacts Setup</gui> window opens.</p>
+  <p>When you run <app>Contacts</app> for the first time, the <gui>Contacts
+  Setup</gui> window opens.</p>
    
-   <p>If you have <link xref="accounts">online accounts</link> configured, they
-    are listed with <gui>Local Address Book</gui>. Select an item from the list
-    and click <gui style="button">Select</gui>.</p>
+  <p>If you have <link xref="accounts">online accounts</link> configured, they
+  are listed with <gui>Local Address Book</gui>. Select an item from the list
+  and click <gui style="button">Select</gui>.</p>
   
   <note>
     <p>Click the <gui style="button">Online Account Settings</gui> to edit
      existing account settings.</p>
   </note>
   
-   <p>If you have no online accounts configured, click
-    <gui style="button">Online Accounts</gui> to begin the setup. If you don't
-    wish to set up online accounts at this time, click
-    <gui style="button">Local Address Book</gui>.</p>
-
+  <p>If you have no online accounts configured, click
+  <gui style="button">Online Accounts</gui> to begin the setup. If you don't
+  wish to set up online accounts at this time, click <gui style="button">Local
+  Address Book</gui>.</p>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
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