[evolution/help-reorder] Edit the intro and assistant page, rephrasing sentences.



commit fae63a0d140f8d2972ed92d1d63b64feff44c651
Author: Julita Inca <jinca gnome org>
Date:   Thu Feb 13 17:30:22 2014 +0000

    Edit the intro and assistant page, rephrasing sentences.

 help/C/assistant.page |    3 +++
 help/C/intro.page     |    8 ++++----
 2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/assistant.page b/help/C/assistant.page
index 50b41e2..d8d6b31 100644
--- a/help/C/assistant.page
+++ b/help/C/assistant.page
@@ -26,6 +26,9 @@
     </item>
     <item>
      <p>Enter your name and email to identify yourself, then click on <gui>Continue</gui>.</p>
+     <p>Optinally, you can hiddenly copy all the sending mails to another account. You can also register the 
name of the organization you belong. It will appear the moment somebody import you as his/her contact.</p>    
+    </item>
+    <item>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
diff --git a/help/C/intro.page b/help/C/intro.page
index a64e92b..803c7d6 100644
--- a/help/C/intro.page
+++ b/help/C/intro.page
@@ -3,12 +3,12 @@
       type="topic" id="intro">
 
   <info>
-    <desc>Keep your personal information like your emails and shedule in one place.</desc>
+    <desc>Keep your personal information such as your emails and shedule in one place.</desc>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="index" group="#first"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.10.3" version="0.4" date="2014-01-25" status="draft"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.10.2" version="0.5" date="2014-02-11" status="review"/>      
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10.2" version="0.5" date="2014-02-12" status="review"/>      
     
     <credit type="author">
       <name its:translate="no">Brian Grohe</name>
@@ -35,8 +35,8 @@
 
 <p><app>Evolution</app> is a personal information management application that combines email client 
funcionalities with agenda, address book, to-do list and notes in one place.</p>
 
-<p>By default <app>Evolution</app> opens the <gui>Mail</gui> view ready to <link xref="check-mail">check 
your mail</link> (if not, use the <link xref="assistant">assistant</link>). You need to swith to the 
<gui>Calendar</gui> view to <link xref="conf-appointment">make an appointment</link>; to the 
<gui>Contact</gui> view to <link xref="add-contact">save your contact</link>; to the <gui>Task</gui> view to 
<link xref="add-memo">plan a to-do list</link>; to the <gui>Memo</gui> view to <link xref="add-memo">add a 
task</link>.</p>
+<p>By default <app>Evolution</app> opens the <gui>Mail</gui> view ready to <link xref="check-mail">check 
your mail</link> (if not, use the <link xref="assistant">assistant</link>). You need to swith to the 
<gui>Calendar</gui> view to <link xref="conf-appointment">make an appointment</link>, to the 
<gui>Contact</gui> view to <link xref="add-contact">save your contact</link>, to the <gui>Task</gui> view to 
<link xref="add-memo">plan a to-do list</link>, and to the <gui>Memo</gui> view to <link xref="add-memo">add 
a task</link>.</p>
 
-<note style="advanced"><p>When Evolution starts, it remembers the last view that you used. You can click on 
the specific view to start to work. </p><p>These <gui>Views</gui> are placed in the bottom of the left pane 
of the Window.</p></note>
+<note style="advanced"><p>When Evolution starts, it remembers the last view that you used. You can click on 
the specific view to start to work. </p><p>These <gui>Views</gui> are placed in the bottom left of the 
Window.</p></note>
 
 </page>


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