[evolution/help-reorder] Edit the intro page of Evolution

[Julita Inca <jinca src gnome org>]

commit ac899c3504cd9d3b2ce9d404f82d9d9d22b79368
Author: Julita Inca <jinca gnome org>
Date:   Tue Feb 11 05:35:12 2014 +0000

    Edit the intro page of Evolution

 help/C/intro.page |   11 ++++++-----
 1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/intro.page b/help/C/intro.page
index 67fbfc0..c93afec 100644
--- a/help/C/intro.page
+++ b/help/C/intro.page
@@ -3,12 +3,12 @@
       type="topic" id="intro">
 
   <info>
-    <desc>Keep your personal information like your mail and shedule in one place.</desc>
+    <desc>Keep your personal information like your emails and shedule in one place.</desc>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="index" group="#first"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.10.3" version="0.4" date="2014-01-25" status="draft"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.10.2" version="0.5" date="2014-01-29" status="review"/>      
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10.2" version="0.5" date="2014-02-11" status="review"/>      
     
     <credit type="author">
       <name its:translate="no">Brian Grohe</name>
@@ -32,10 +32,11 @@
   </info>
 
 <title>Introduction to Evolution</title>
-<p>Keep your personal information information like your mail and shedule in one place.</p>
 
-<p>By default Evolution opens the mail view. This is were you can view all your mail. You can change to 
other views of the application by going to the bottom of the left pane in the window (the so-called 
"switcher") and selecting the desired view. <link xref="intro-main-window">Learn more about the elements of 
the main window.</link></p>
+<p><app>Evolution</app> is a personal information management application that combines email client 
funcionalities with agenda, address book, to-do list and notes in one place.</p>
 
-<note style="advanced"><p>When Evolution starts, it remembers the last view that you used. However you can 
also explicitly start Evolution in a specific view. For the calendar view, use the command <cmd>evolution 
--component=calendar</cmd> in the <app>Terminal</app> application. Other available options are "mail", 
"contacts", "tasks", and "memos".</p></note>
+<p>By default <app>Evolution</app> opens the <gui>Mail</gui> view ready to <link xref="check-mail">check 
your mail</link>. You need to swith to the <gui>Calendar</gui> view to <link xref="conf-appointment">make an 
appointment</link>; to the <gui>Contact</gui> view to <link xref="add-contact">save your contact</link>; to 
the <gui>Task</gui> view to <link xref="add-memo">plan a to-do list</link>; to the <gui>Memo</gui> view to 
<link xref="add-memo">add a task</link>.</p>
+
+<note style="advanced"><p>When Evolution starts, it remembers the last view that you used. You can click on 
the specific view to start to work. </p><p>These <gui>Views</gui> are placed in the bottom of the left pane 
of the Window.</p></note>
 
 </page>