[gnome-system-monitor/wip/mallard-help: 9/62] minor changes to formatting and author credits.



commit 0d2ba967cdaecc66c176d986f886715e5e6aec21
Author: Kelly Sinnott <ksinnott5ht gmail com>
Date:   Mon Aug 1 18:05:55 2011 -0700

    minor changes to formatting and author credits.

 help/C/cpu-check.page      |    6 +++++-
 help/C/cpu-mem-normal.page |    6 +++++-
 help/C/cpu-multicore.page  |   19 ++++++++-----------
 help/C/fs-device.page      |    2 +-
 help/C/index.page          |    6 ++++++
 5 files changed, 25 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/cpu-check.page b/help/C/cpu-check.page
index bd5f4dd..23ecc29 100644
--- a/help/C/cpu-check.page
+++ b/help/C/cpu-check.page
@@ -4,7 +4,11 @@
   <info>
     <revision version="0.1" date="2011-07-12" status="review"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index"/>
-
+    <credit type="author copyright">
+      <name>Phil Bull</name>
+      <email>philbull gmail com</email>
+      <years>2011</years>
+    </credit>
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Kelly Sinnott</name>
       <email>ksinnott5ht gmail com</email>
diff --git a/help/C/cpu-mem-normal.page b/help/C/cpu-mem-normal.page
index 8fac931..74ddfa1 100644
--- a/help/C/cpu-mem-normal.page
+++ b/help/C/cpu-mem-normal.page
@@ -4,7 +4,11 @@
   <info>
     <revision version="0.1" date="2011-07-14" status="review"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index" />
-
+    <credit type="author copyright">
+      <name>Phil Bull</name>
+      <email>philbull gmail com</email>
+      <years>2011</years>
+    </credit>
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Kelly Sinnott</name>
       <email>ksinnott5ht gmail com</email>
diff --git a/help/C/cpu-multicore.page b/help/C/cpu-multicore.page
index c88fe4f..8f27486 100644
--- a/help/C/cpu-multicore.page
+++ b/help/C/cpu-multicore.page
@@ -2,15 +2,19 @@
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="cpu-multicore">
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2011-06-18" status="stub"/>
-    <!--<link type="guide" xref="..." />-->
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2011-07-28" status="review"/>
+    <link type="guide" xref="index" />
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
       <email>philbull gmail com</email>
       <years>2011</years>
     </credit>
-
+    <credit type="author copyright">
+      <name>Kelly Sinnott</name>
+      <email>ksinnott5ht gmail com</email>
+      <years>2011</years>
+    </credit>
     <desc>Some computers have several CPUs (processors). This allows them to run more applications at the 
same time.</desc>
   </info>
 
@@ -24,13 +28,6 @@
     <cite date="2011-07-12" href="mailto:ksinnott5ht gmail com">Kelly Sinnott</cite>
        <p>I've included a pretty concise paragraph on this in cpu-check.page; I'm not sure if it should be 
moved here, copied here, or what...probably what.</p>
   </comment>
-
-  <p>Short introductory text...</p>
-
-  <steps>
-    <item><p>First step...</p></item>
-    <item><p>Second step...</p></item>
-    <item><p>Third step...</p></item>
-  </steps>
+<p>Some processors are actually composed of multiple independent processors in one component. These are 
referred to as <em>multi-core</em> processors. Multi-core CPUs allow an increase in overall performance 
otherwise limited by physical constraints on a single core. However, a single process or thread is limited to 
a single core. Because of this, a single demanding, non-threaded process can dominate a core, failing to take 
advantage of the full CPU.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/fs-device.page b/help/C/fs-device.page
index 0c0d95f..fd5d2da 100644
--- a/help/C/fs-device.page
+++ b/help/C/fs-device.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="fs-device">
   <info>
     <revision version="0.1" date="2011-07-25" status="review"/>
-    <!--<link type="guide" xref="..." />-->
+    <link type="guide" xref="index" />
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 3d38538..c29dea1 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -9,6 +9,12 @@
       <email>philbull gmail com</email>
       <years>2011</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="author copyright">
+      <name>Kelly Sinnott</name>
+      <email>ksinnott5ht gmail com</email>
+      <years>2011</years>
+    </credit>
+
 
     <desc>Use the System Monitor to view information on how well your computer is running and whether there 
are any problems.</desc>
     


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