[gnome-system-monitor/wip/mallard-help: 25/68] Wrote draft for process-many modified: process-many.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit f16757b7818670e64fe8fbf41d23eca544a65866
Author: Kelly Sinnott <ksinnott5ht gmail com>
Date:   Tue Aug 30 06:25:00 2011 -0700

    Wrote draft for process-many
        modified:   process-many.page

 help/C/process-many.page          |   16 +++++++---------
 help/C/process-priority-what.page |    2 +-
 2 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/process-many.page b/help/C/process-many.page
index 7060572..a3792ac 100644
--- a/help/C/process-many.page
+++ b/help/C/process-many.page
@@ -2,14 +2,18 @@
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="process-many">
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2011-08-19" status="stub"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2011-08-28" status="review"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index" group="processes-info" />
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
       <email>philbull gmail com</email>
       <years>2011</years>
     </credit>
-
+    <credit type="author copyright">
+      <name>Kelly Sinnott</name>
+      <email>ksinnott5ht gmail com</email>
+      <years>2011</years>
+    </credit>
     <desc>Most of the items in the Processes tab are system processes which run in the background.</desc>
   </info>
 
@@ -20,12 +24,6 @@
     <p>Explain that the OS starts a lot of system processes of its own, which work in the background. You 
shouldn't usually try to kill them.</p>
   </comment>
 
-  <p>Short introductory text...</p>
-
-  <steps>
-    <item><p>First step...</p></item>
-    <item><p>Second step...</p></item>
-    <item><p>Third step...</p></item>
-  </steps>
+  <p>When you view the process list in the <gui>Processes</gui> tab, you will see quite a few processes that 
you did not start. These processes are started by the system and work in the background. Do not try to kill 
them unless you know what you are doing.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/process-priority-what.page b/help/C/process-priority-what.page
index e3b90d7..0c14369 100644
--- a/help/C/process-priority-what.page
+++ b/help/C/process-priority-what.page
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
       <years>2011</years>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>The Nice value of a process is used to adjust its priority</desc>
+    <desc>The Nice value of a process is used to adjust its priority.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>What is the "nice" value of a process?</title>