[gnome-system-monitor/wip/mallard-help: 48/60] Review mem-swap help page



commit 4d81c31aa3836a5d45bc8b6b39f7464698ea8705
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Tue Jan 28 13:23:13 2014 +0000

    Review mem-swap help page

 help/C/mem-swap.page |   35 +++++++++++++++++++++--------------
 1 files changed, 21 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/mem-swap.page b/help/C/mem-swap.page
index bb3417f..7e727d0 100644
--- a/help/C/mem-swap.page
+++ b/help/C/mem-swap.page
@@ -1,8 +1,9 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="mem-swap">
+
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.2" pkgversion="3.11" date="2014-01-26" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.11" date="2014-01-28" status="final"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index" group="memory" />
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
@@ -28,26 +29,32 @@
   <comment>
     <cite date="2011-06-18" href="mailto:philbull gmail com">Phil Bull</cite>
     <p>Explain what swap is and how it helps. Explain that the computer may run
- slowly if it's swapping too much.</p>
+    slowly if it's swapping too much.</p>
   </comment>
 
-  <p>Swap memory or <gui>swap space</gui> is the on-disk component of the virtual
- memory system. It is pre-configured as a <gui>swap partition</gui> or a
- <gui>swap file</gui> when Linux is first installed, but can also be added
- later.</p>
+  <p>Swap memory or <em>swap space</em> is the on-disk component of the virtual
+  memory system. It is pre-configured as a <em>swap partition</em> or a
+  <em>swap file</em> when Linux is first installed, but can also be added
+  later.</p>
 
- <note><p>Disk access is <em>very</em> slow compared to memory access. The
- system runs more slowly if there is excessive swapping, or <gui>thrashing</gui>,
- when the system is unable to find enough free memory. In this situation the only
- solution is to add more RAM.</p></note>
+  <note>
+    <p>Disk access is <em>very</em> slow compared to memory access. The system
+    runs more slowly if there is excessive swapping, or <em>thrashing</em>,
+    when the system is unable to find enough free memory. In this situation the
+    only solution is to add more RAM.</p>
+  </note>
 
-  <p>To see whether swapping, or <gui>paging</gui>, has become a performance
+  <p>To see whether swapping, or <em>paging</em>, has become a performance
   issue:</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <item><p>Click the <gui>Resources</gui> tab.</p></item>
-    <item><p>The <gui>Memory and Swap History</gui> graph shows memory and swap
- use as percentages.</p></item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click the <gui>Resources</gui> tab.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>The <gui>Memory and Swap History</gui> graph shows memory and swap use
+      as percentages.</p>
+    </item>
   </steps>
 
 </page>


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