[gnome-system-monitor/wip/mallard-help: 42/60] Relicensed, rewrote process-identify-hog

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 1092fbca2f96cebe9485dcd507e7b7b38f29153c
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill gnome org>
Date:   Mon Jan 27 15:05:36 2014 +0000

    Relicensed, rewrote process-identify-hog

 help/C/process-identify-hog.page |   26 +++++++++++++++++---------
 1 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/process-identify-hog.page b/help/C/process-identify-hog.page
index 8499501..03688d4 100644
--- a/help/C/process-identify-hog.page
+++ b/help/C/process-identify-hog.page
@@ -2,9 +2,11 @@
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="process-identify-hog">
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2011-08-19" status="stub"/>
+    <revision version="0.2" pkgversion="3.11" date="2014-01-26" status="review"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index" group="processes-tasks" />
 
+    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
       <email>philbull gmail com</email>
@@ -14,7 +16,7 @@
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
-      <years>2011</years>
+      <years>2011, 2014</years>
     </credit>
 
     <desc>Sort the list of processes by <gui>% CPU</gui> to see which
@@ -30,7 +32,8 @@
     similar if they hang, for example.)</p>
   </comment>
 
-  <p>To find a process that might be using more resources than it should:</p>
+  <p>A program that is using more than its share of the CPU may slow down the
+  whole computer. To find which process could be doing this:</p>
 
   <steps>      
     <item>
@@ -41,14 +44,19 @@
       according to CPU use.</p>
       <note>
        <p>The arrow in the column header shows the sort direction; click again
-        to reverse it. If the arrow points up, the processes using the highest
-        percentage CPU appear at the top of the list.</p>
-      </note>
-       <note style = "tip"><p>A process that has hung or crashed might use 100%
-       CPU. If this happens you may need to <link xref="process-kill">kill</link>
-       the process.</p>
+        to reverse it. The arrow should point up.</p>
       </note>
    </item>
   </steps>
 
+  <p>The processes at the top of the list are using the highest percentage CPU.
+  Once you identify which one might be using more resources than it should, you
+  can decide whether to close the program itself, or close other programs to
+  try to reduce the CPU load.</p>
+
+  <note style = "tip">
+    <p>A process that has hung or crashed might use 100% CPU. If this happens
+    you may need to <link xref="process-kill">kill</link> the process.</p>
+  </note>
+
 </page>