[gnome-devel-docs] hig3: minor fixes



commit a9ece2cdca03bee9952daad7557ac36f4a7d656a
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill gnome org>
Date:   Tue Aug 19 19:22:30 2014 -0400

    hig3: minor fixes

 hig3/C/application-basics.page |    6 +++---
 hig3/C/primary-windows.page    |    2 +-
 2 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/hig3/C/application-basics.page b/hig3/C/application-basics.page
index bef3a47..3217d48 100644
--- a/hig3/C/application-basics.page
+++ b/hig3/C/application-basics.page
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
 
 <p>These Human Interface Guidelines are intended to help with the creation of applications. An understanding 
of what an application is will help you to distribute your software more effectively, as well as ensure 
effective and consistent system integration.</p>
 
-<p>The application model allows users to understand how software how it is distributed, installed and 
removed, as well as how that software behaves when in use. Ensuring that your software behaves according to 
this model will therefore help to ensure that it is predictable and conforms to user expectations. It will 
also ensure correct integration with system tools for installing and removing applications.</p>
+<p>The application model allows users to understand how software is distributed, installed and removed, as 
well as how that software behaves when in use. Ensuring that your software behaves according to this model 
will therefore help to ensure that it is predictable and conforms to user expectations. It will also ensure 
correct integration with system tools for installing and removing applications.</p>
 
 <section id="application-definition">
 <title>Defining an application</title>
@@ -58,9 +58,9 @@ Applications are launched and switched to via their launchers...
 <item><p>It needs to identify your application in the systems where it is installed and run.</p></item>
 </list>
 
-<p>Ensure that your application name is short - less than 15 characters. This will ensure that it is always 
displayed in full within a GNOME 3 environment.</p>
+<p>Ensure that your application name is short - fewer than 15 characters. This will ensure that it is always 
displayed in full within a GNOME 3 environment.</p>
 
-<p>Additionally, choose an application name that is easy to understand and communicates your application's 
functionity. Avoid references which will not be understood or be familiar to potential users, such as obscure 
cultural references, inside jokes and acronyms. Instead, pick a name that references what your application 
does, or the domain in which it operates.</p>
+<p>Additionally, choose an application name that is easy to understand and communicates your application's 
functionality. Avoid references which will not be understood or be familiar to potential users, such as 
obscure cultural references, inside jokes and acronyms. Instead, pick a name that references what your 
application does, or the domain in which it operates.</p>
 
 </section>
 
diff --git a/hig3/C/primary-windows.page b/hig3/C/primary-windows.page
index d4f08d8..9828bec 100644
--- a/hig3/C/primary-windows.page
+++ b/hig3/C/primary-windows.page
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@
 <section id="multiple-instance-applications">
 <title>Multiple instance applications</title>
 
-<p>Multiple instance applications can have a multiple primary windows. Typically, each primary window will 
be identical. Multi-instance applications are frequently viewers or editors, such as for documents or 
images.</p>
+<p>Multiple instance applications can have multiple primary windows. Typically, each primary window will be 
identical. Multi-instance applications are frequently viewers or editors, such as for documents or images.</p>
 
 <p>Both single and multiple instance applications can allow multiple content items to be opened, either 
through the use of <link xref="tabs">tabs</link> or browser-style navigation. However, multiple windows do 
offer additional capabilities, which include:</p>
 


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