[swell-foop/mallard-help] help: fix punctuation in strategy.page



commit aeac002a5bb0161ee8555f71e41fa4a22f46eece
Author: Rashi Aswani <aswanirashi19 gmail com>
Date:   Sat Aug 16 20:48:58 2014 +0530

    help: fix punctuation in strategy.page

 help/C/strategy.page |    6 +++---
 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/strategy.page b/help/C/strategy.page
index 647e2ad..4317b7d 100644
--- a/help/C/strategy.page
+++ b/help/C/strategy.page
@@ -21,8 +21,8 @@
   <title>Strategy</title>
 
   <p>The most important rule when aiming for a high score is to think ahead,
-  each group you remove will form and destroy other groups. Some tips are
-  to play smartly are:</p>
+  each group you remove will form and destroy other groups. Some tips to play
+  smartly are:</p>
   <list>
     <item><p>Try to remove higher groups first, unless removing another group
     will make it larger. Vertically aligned objects can't be misaligned, but
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
     <item><p>Since the score increases quadratically, big groups of objects
     will score more.</p></item>
     <item><p>If you have a choice between merging two groups of two into four
-    or just adding one more to the group of six then you should add the single
+    or, just adding one more to the group of six then, you should add the single
     object. Even though the groups of two you are left with score no points,
     the bigger group scores more overall.</p></item>
   </list>


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