[gnome-klotski/mallard-help: 23/52] help: removed 'new-game-on-close' section, updated the steps in start-game.page



commit 13e0002406eec1a3632afa77020ca3e569226021
Author: Rashi Aswani <aswanirashi19 gmail com>
Date:   Thu Jul 3 16:54:33 2014 +0530

    help: removed 'new-game-on-close' section, updated the steps in start-game.page

 help/C/start-game.page |   45 ++++++++++++++++++++-------------------------
 1 files changed, 20 insertions(+), 25 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/start-game.page b/help/C/start-game.page
index 56f763e..6448219 100644
--- a/help/C/start-game.page
+++ b/help/C/start-game.page
@@ -4,8 +4,11 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
+    
     <revision version="3.12" date="2014-05-26" status="review"/>
-
+    <link type="seealso" xref="rules"/>
+    <link type="seealso" xref="keyboard-shortcuts"/>
+    <link type="seealso" xref="puzzles"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Rashi Aswani</name>
       <email>aswanirashi19 gmail com</email>
@@ -14,34 +17,26 @@
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; />
 
+    <desc>Play another game.</desc>
+
   </info>
 
   <title>Start a new game</title>
 
-  <p><app>Klotski</app> offers you a large collection of games, to play a new
+  <p><app>Klotski</app> offers a large collection of games, to play a new
   game:</p>
-  <!-- No need to say "you" -->
-    <steps>
-      <item><p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Klotski</gui>
-      <gui style="menuitem">New Game</gui></guiseq> from the application menu.
-      <!--Don't describe the UI! Don't say "Application Menu", your mark up is enough to indicate that the 
user should go to App Menu -->
-      Alternatively, you can click the <gui style="button">Start Over</gui>
-      button in the bottom right. It will start a new game of the default
-      <!-- No need to say "bottom right", the users are not blind! they can see for themselves-->
-      puzzle, <gui>Only 18 steps</gui>.</p></item>
-
-      <!--This needs to go as a new section, on how to play different puzzles other than default one -->
-      <item><p>To play a different puzzle, click the <gui style="button">View
-      Puzzles</gui> button, choose a game category and start a new puzzle by
-      double clicking on it.</p></item>
-    </steps>
- 
- <!-- Dont need this section -->
-  <section id="new-game-on-close">
-  <title>Start a new game on completion of a puzzle</title>
-
-  <p>On finishing a puzzle, you can start a new game of the same puzzle
-  directly. To start a new game, click on <gui>New Game</gui> in the appeared
-  dialog box.</p>
+  <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Klotski</gui>
+  <gui style="menuitem">New Game</gui></guiseq>.
+  Alternatively, you can click the <gui style="button">Start Over</gui>
+  button. It will start a new game of the default puzzle, <gui>Only 18
+  steps</gui>.</p>
+
+  <section id="play-different-puzzles">
+  <title>Play a different puzzle</title>
+
+    <p>To play a different puzzle, click the <gui style="button">View
+    Puzzles</gui> button, choose a game category and start a new puzzle by
+    double clicking on it.</p>
   </section>
+
 </page>


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