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[release-notes/gnome-3-10] final tweaks

commit b7c7764aa4ea635fed94fd706799cd8469e005a0
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Wed Sep 18 15:01:01 2013 +0100

    final tweaks

 help/C/developers.page   |    2 +-
 help/C/index.page        |    2 +-
 help/C/more-apps.page    |    2 +-
 help/C/more-core-ux.page |   12 ++++++------
 4 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/developers.page b/help/C/developers.page
index 1aa2880..e8f1d86 100644
--- a/help/C/developers.page
+++ b/help/C/developers.page
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@
     <p>The new geolocation abilities in GNOME 3.10 allow applications to access information on places and to 
identify the current location of the system. To do this, two new components have been introduced:</p>
     <list>
       <item><p><link href="https://developer.gnome.org/geocode-glib/index.html";>geocode-glib</link>: a new 
library for (reverse) geocoding. This allows you to find information on places according to search terms or 
coordinates. It relies on the <link href="https://wiki.openstreetmap.org/wiki/Nominatim";>Nominatim</link> 
service from OpenStreetMap.</p></item>
-      <item><p>GeoClue2: a re-written GeoClue implementation designed for simplicity and privacy. This 
allows you to identify the current location.</p></item>
+      <item><p><link href="http://www.freedesktop.org/software/geoclue/docs/";>GeoClue2</link>: a re-written 
GeoClue implementation designed for simplicity and privacy. This allows you to identify the current 
location.</p></item>
     </list>
   </section>
 
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 19f5644..c4211fa 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@
 
   <section id="geolocation">
     <title>Geolocation</title>
-    <p>A new geolocation framework has been created for GNOME &gnomeversion;. This allows your location to 
be automatically determined using various data sources, including your internet connection and GPS. The new 
framework is being used in a number of places. A new <gui>Automatic Time Zone</gui> setting makes your 
device's clock update when you move to different time zones, and <app>Clocks</app> will automatically show a 
clock for your current location. GNOME &gnomeversion; also introduces a <link type="topic" 
xref="more-apps#maps">new maps application</link>, which is able to automatically detect where you are and 
show a map of your location.</p>
+    <p>A new geolocation framework has been created for GNOME &gnomeversion;. This allows your location to 
be automatically determined using various data sources, including your internet connection and GPS. The new 
framework is being used in a number of places: a new <gui>Automatic Time Zone</gui> setting makes your 
device's clock update when you move to different time zones, and <app>Clocks</app> will automatically show a 
clock for your current location. GNOME &gnomeversion; also introduces a <link type="topic" 
xref="more-apps#maps">new maps application</link>, which can detect where you are and show a map of your 
location.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/gnome-maps.png"/>
   </section>
 
diff --git a/help/C/more-apps.page b/help/C/more-apps.page
index 1f3526f..d1b6206 100644
--- a/help/C/more-apps.page
+++ b/help/C/more-apps.page
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@
 
   <section id="tweak-tool">
     <title>Tweak Tool</title>
-    <p><app>Tweak Tool</app> has had a complete refresh for GNOME &gnomeversion;. The configuration options 
it provides have been reorganized to make browsing easier, and the layout and labelling of each option has 
been updated to make them easy to understand.</p>
+    <p>The <app>Tweak Tool</app> has had a complete refresh for GNOME &gnomeversion;. The configuration 
options it provides have been reorganized to make browsing easier, and the layout and labelling of each 
option has been updated to make them easy to understand.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
   </section>
 
diff --git a/help/C/more-core-ux.page b/help/C/more-core-ux.page
index 3d92906..1a99e79 100644
--- a/help/C/more-core-ux.page
+++ b/help/C/more-core-ux.page
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
 
   <title>Updates to the Core GNOME 3 User Experience</title>
 
-  <p>The core GNOME 3 experience includes many new features and enhancements for 3.10. Here are some more of 
the many improvements that can be found in the latest version.</p>
+  <p>GNOME 3.10 includes numerous other new features and enhancements. Here are some of the other 
improvements that can be found in the latest version.</p>
 
   <section id="app-view">
     <title>Paginated Application View</title>
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
 
   <section id="scrolling">
     <title>Fine Scrolling</title>
-    <p>Scroll bars in GNOME now feature a new mode that allows fine scrolling. This allows precise movements 
within a small area, and is particularly useful if the scrolled area is very large. To activate fine 
scrolling, just click and hold on a scroll bar handle, or click on the handle while holding 
<key>Shift</key>.</p>
+    <p>Scroll bars in GNOME now feature a new mode that allows fine scrolling. This allows precise movements 
over small distances, and is particularly useful if the scrolled area is very large. To activate fine 
scrolling, just click and hold on a scroll bar handle, or click on the handle while holding 
<key>Shift</key>.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
   </section>
 
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
     <list>
       <item><p><gui>Date &amp; Time</gui>: these have been overhauled to make them easier to use, and now 
have a bigger, better looking time zone map and clearer options. A new <gui>Automatic Time Zone</gui> option 
is provided, which uses the new geolocation framework which has been introduced in 3.10.</p></item>
       <item><p><gui>Displays</gui>: the <gui>Displays</gui> section has been completely redesigned, making 
configuration much easier.</p></item>
-      <item><p><gui>Online Accounts</gui>: chat accounts have now been integrated into <gui>Online 
Accounts</gui>, which means that you can now access all your accounts in one place. You can now log into your 
Google account using <link href="https://support.google.com/accounts/answer/180744";>two-step 
verification</link>, and Flickr accounts can also be added.</p></item>
+      <item><p><gui>Online Accounts</gui>: chat accounts have now been integrated into <gui>Online 
Accounts</gui>, which means that you can now access all your accounts in one place. You can now log into your 
Google account using <link href="https://support.google.com/accounts/answer/180744";>two-step 
verification</link>, and <gui>Online Accounts</gui> now includes Flickr.</p></item>
       <item><p><gui>Universal Access</gui>: the different <gui>Universal Access</gui> sections have been 
redesigned and combined into a single page. This makes it easier to find the settings you are looking 
for.</p></item>
       <item><p><gui>Background</gui>: in addition to the new lock screen background feature, it is now also 
possible to select backgrounds from Flickr accounts.</p></item>
     </list>
@@ -63,13 +63,13 @@
 
   <section id="high-dpi">
     <title>High-Resolution Display Support</title>
-    <p>High-resolution displays (also known as high-density displays) are becoming increasingly common. 
GNOME 3.10 introduces support for these types of displays, and will now automatically scale what is displayed 
on the screen to compensate for increased display density. This ensures that controls and content appear at 
the correct size, and that interfaces are usable. This work could not have been possible without <link 
href="http://www.gnome.org/news/2013/07/gnome-receives-hardware-donations-to-assist-with-high-definition-support/";>the
 generous donation of high-density display laptops</link> by Brion Vibber and Intel's <link 
href="https://01.org/";>Open Source Technology Center (OTC)</link>.</p>
+    <p>High-resolution displays (also known as high-density displays) are becoming increasingly common. 
GNOME 3.10 introduces support for these types of displays, and will now automatically scale what is displayed 
on the screen to compensate for increased display density. This ensures that controls and content appear at 
the correct size, and that interfaces are usable. This work would not have been possible without <link 
href="http://www.gnome.org/news/2013/07/gnome-receives-hardware-donations-to-assist-with-high-definition-support/";>the
 generous donation of high-density display laptops</link> by Brion Vibber and Intel's <link 
href="https://01.org/";>Open Source Technology Center (OTC)</link>.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
   </section>
 
   <section id="smart-cards">
     <title>Smart Card Support</title>
-    <p>Smart cards are now supported as an alternate way to log in and unlock. Primarily of interest to 
enterprise GNOME deployments, smart cards can be configured as the primary authentication method (password 
access can be disabled). It is also possible to configure whether removing a smart card locks the device or 
logs the user out.</p>
+    <p>Smart cards are now supported as an alternate way to log in and unlock. Primarily of interest to 
enterprise GNOME deployments, smart cards can be configured as the primary authentication method (and 
password access can be disabled). It is also possible to configure whether removing a smart card locks the 
device or logs the user out.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
   </section>
 
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@
       <item><p>Better looking lock screen notifications.</p></item>
       <item><p>A screen reader can be turned on or off at any time by pressing 
<keyseq><key>Super</key><key>Alt</key><key>S</key></keyseq>.</p></item>
       <item><p>Web applications now have header bars with some useful controls for navigation.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Consolidated log out and power off dialogs, which now incorporate information on other logged 
in users or busy applications.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Consolidated log out and power off dialogs, which now incorporate warnings about other logged 
in users or busy applications (these warnings were previously included in a separate set of dialog 
windows).</p></item>
       <item><p>A new default background.</p></item>
     </list>
   </section>
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