[release-notes/gnome-3-10] incorporate changes from kat and tiffany



commit 536f60d1a39e02101fe68a6c59c822f6fe468be2
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Wed Sep 18 14:10:02 2013 +0100

    incorporate changes from kat and tiffany

 help/C/developers.page   |    6 +++---
 help/C/i18n.page         |    2 +-
 help/C/index.page        |    6 +++---
 help/C/more-apps.page    |    1 +
 help/C/more-core-ux.page |    4 ++--
 5 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/developers.page b/help/C/developers.page
index 0f5faf1..1aa2880 100644
--- a/help/C/developers.page
+++ b/help/C/developers.page
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
 
   <section id="wayland">
     <title>Wayland</title>
-    <p>GNOME 3.10 introduces the ability to run a GNOME session as well as GNOME applications using Wayland. 
This support is experimental and is intended for testing purposes only. <cmd>gnome-shell</cmd> or 
applications running on Wayland may be unstable and could crash.</p>
+    <p>With GNOME 3.10, it is possible to run a GNOME session as well as GNOME applications using Wayland. 
This support is experimental and is intended for testing purposes only. <cmd>gnome-shell</cmd> or 
applications running on Wayland may be unstable and could crash.</p>
     <p>To run <cmd>gnome-shell</cmd> under Wayland, execute the following command in a terminal:</p>
     <p><cmd>gnome-session --session=gnome-wayland</cmd></p>
     <p>It is also possible to run individual applications on Wayland by specifying the 
<cmd>GDK_BACKEND</cmd>. Run the following command, substituting <input>application-name</input> for the name 
of the application's executable:</p>
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
 
   <section id="new-widgets">
     <title>New GTK+ Widgets</title>
-    <p>GTK+ 3.10 introduces a collection of new interface widgets. These provide additional abilities, such 
as adding animated transitions, as well as greater flexibility. In some cases they provide easy-to-use 
alternatives to existing widgets. The new widgets have been created to enable the creation of the latest 
GNOME 3 applications.</p>
+    <p>GTK+ 3.10 introduces a collection of new interface widgets. These provide additional abilities, such 
as adding animated transitions, as well as greater flexibility. In some cases they provide easy-to-use 
alternatives to existing widgets. The new widgets have been created in line with the latest GNOME 3 
application designs.</p>
     <list>
       <item><p><code href="https://developer.gnome.org/gtk3/3.10/GtkStack.html";>GtkStack</code>: a container 
which shows one child at a time. Transitions between pages can be animated as slides or fades.</p></item>
       <item><p><code 
href="https://developer.gnome.org/gtk3/3.10/GtkStackSwitcher.html";>GtkStackSwitcher</code>: a set of linked 
buttons that can be used to control which page is displayed in a stack. Designed to be used in conjunction 
with <code>GtkStack</code>.</p></item>
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@
 
   <section id="composite-widget-templates">
     <title>Composite Widget Templates</title>
-    <p>From 3.10, GTK+ allows the creation of composite widget templates. The new feature allows composite 
widgets to be defined using XML, which avoids the need to construct them manually. GTK+ is already taking 
advantage of this feature to define its own composite widgets, such as <code>GtkVolumeButton</code> and 
<code>GtkFileChooserDefault</code>. Application authors can use the same capability to make their own, which 
can be done by directly with XML or with the <app>Glade</app> interface builder.</p>
+    <p>Composite widget templates are a new feature in GTK+ 3.10. The new feature allows composite widgets 
to be defined using XML, which avoids the need to construct them manually. GTK+ is already taking advantage 
of this feature to define its own composite widgets, such as <code>GtkVolumeButton</code> and 
<code>GtkFileChooserDefault</code>. Application authors can use the same capability to make their own, which 
can be done by directly with XML or with the <app>Glade</app> interface builder.</p>
     <p>Tristan Van Berkom has written a <link 
href="http://blogs.gnome.org/tvb/2013/04/09/announcing-composite-widget-templates/";>detailed blog post about 
this new feature</link>, which includes a tutorial and a working example that you can try.</p>
   </section>
 
diff --git a/help/C/i18n.page b/help/C/i18n.page
index 374b036..2a264ce 100644
--- a/help/C/i18n.page
+++ b/help/C/i18n.page
@@ -85,6 +85,6 @@
 
   <p>Numerous other languages are partially supported, with more than half of their strings translated.</p>
 
-  <p>Detailed statistics and more information are all available on GNOME's <link 
href="https://l10n.gnome.org/";>translation status site</link>. You can also find out how to help translate 
GNOME.</p>
+  <p>Detailed statistics and more information are all available on GNOME's <link 
href="https://l10n.gnome.org/";>translation status site</link>. You can also find out how to <link 
href="https://live.gnome.org/TranslationProject/ContributeTranslations";>help translate GNOME</link>.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 4fc46b7..53e6e70 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
 
   <section id="wayland">
     <title>Wayland</title>
-    <p><app>Wayland</app> is the next generation technology for display and input on Linux. It promises to 
deliver smoother graphics, with improved animations and transitions. <app>Wayland</app>'s modern architecture 
will provide greater flexibility for developers, and will enable more secure sandboxed applications. 
&gnomeversion; introduces experimental <app>Wayland</app> support, which allows GNOME as well as GNOME 
applications to be run using Wayland. This is an important milestone on the road to full <app>Wayland</app> 
adoption, and will let developers test their software with <app>Wayland</app>. More details can be found in 
the <link type="topic" xref="developers#wayland">developer notes</link>.</p>
+    <p><app>Wayland</app> is the next generation technology for display and input on Linux. It promises to 
deliver smoother graphics, with improved animations and transitions. <app>Wayland</app>'s modern architecture 
will provide greater flexibility for developers, and will enable more secure sandboxed applications. 
&gnomeversion; introduces experimental <app>Wayland</app> support, which allows GNOME as well as GNOME 
applications to be run using <app>Wayland</app>. This is an important milestone on the road to full 
<app>Wayland</app> adoption, and will let developers test their software with <app>Wayland</app>. More 
details can be found in the <link type="topic" xref="developers#wayland">developer notes</link>.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/wayland.png"/>
   </section>
 
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
 
   <section id="header-bars">
     <title>Header Bars</title>
-    <p>A new interface element has been introduced in &gnomeversion;: header bars. These merge titlebars and 
toolbars into a single element, reducing the amount of interface chrome within each window, and giving more 
screen space to content. Header bars also allow more dynamic application interfaces whose controls adjust to 
the current view, and they ensure that window close buttons are always present, irrespective of whether a 
window is maximized or unmaximized.</p>
+    <p>A new interface element has been introduced in &gnomeversion;: header bars. These merge titlebars and 
toolbars into a single element, giving more screen space to window content. Header bars also allow more 
dynamic application interfaces whose controls adjust to the current view, and they ensure that window close 
buttons are always present, irrespective of whether a window is maximized or unmaximized.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/header-bars.png"/>
   </section>
 
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@
 
   <section id="software">
     <title>Software</title>
-    <p>GNOME &gnomeversion; includes a brand new application for finding and installing applications. Called 
<app>Software</app>, it provides an integrated place to do all your software related tasks, like browsing, 
installing and removing applications, and viewing and installing software updates. It contains sections for 
recommended applications and an easy to use interface for browsing available applications. We have lots of 
plans for the future of <app>Software</app>, including user ratings, comments and screenshots of applications 
that you might want to install.</p>
+    <p>GNOME &gnomeversion; includes a brand new application for finding and installing applications, called 
<app>Software</app>. It provides an integrated place to do all your software related tasks, like browsing, 
installing and removing applications, and viewing and installing software updates. It contains sections for 
recommended applications and an easy to use interface for browsing available applications. We have lots of 
plans for the future of <app>Software</app>, including user ratings, comments and screenshots of applications 
that you might want to install.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/gnome-software.png"/>
   </section>
 
diff --git a/help/C/more-apps.page b/help/C/more-apps.page
index 42553dd..1f3526f 100644
--- a/help/C/more-apps.page
+++ b/help/C/more-apps.page
@@ -84,6 +84,7 @@
       <item><p><app>Documents</app> has gained the ability to browse and read documents stored on 
<gui>ownCloud</gui>.</p></item>
       <item><p><app>Contacts</app> has had a lot of user interface improvements, including an updated 
contacts list, better looking contacts pane, and new dialogs for linking contacts and changing your address 
book.</p></item>
       <item><p>The <app>Document Viewer</app> now has DjVu support and a new search results sidebar. It also 
includes the long-awaited PDF caret and keyboard navigation support. This feature places a movable cursor in 
text pages, allowing you to move around and select text with your keyboard. Caret navigation can be activated 
by pressing <key>F7</key>. The work for this feature was funded by the <link 
href="https://www.gnome.org/friends/";>Friends of GNOME</link> accessibility campaign.</p></item>
+      <item><p>In <app>Boxes</app>, it is now possible to drag and drop files between your computer and 
virtual machines. This will automatically work with new virtual machines that have been created using the 
express install option. Non-express installs or older virtual machines require a new 
<code>spice-vdagent</code>; Microsoft Windows virtual machines require <code><link 
href="http://spice-space.org/download/windows/spice-guest-tools/";>spice-guest-tools</link></code>.</p></item>
     </list>
   </section>
 
diff --git a/help/C/more-core-ux.page b/help/C/more-core-ux.page
index 74fd392..3d92906 100644
--- a/help/C/more-core-ux.page
+++ b/help/C/more-core-ux.page
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
 
   <section id="app-view">
     <title>Paginated Application View</title>
-    <p>The application launching view now has pages rather than being scrolled, and has had many other 
layout and animation improvements. Pages make it easier to find the application you are looking for, and 
integrates application folders much more effectively. A lot of time has been spent making this part of GNOME 
3 look and feel great, and it has some extremely nice animations.</p>
+    <p>The application launching view now has pages rather than being scrolled, and has many other layout 
and animation improvements. Pages make it easier to find the application you are looking for, and integrates 
application folders much more effectively. A lot of time has been spent making this part of GNOME 3 look and 
feel great.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/app-view.png"/>
   </section>
 
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
 
   <section id="scrolling">
     <title>Fine Scrolling</title>
-    <p>Scroll bars in GNOME now feature a new mode that allows fine scrolling. This is particularly useful 
if the scrolled area is very large, and allows precise movements within a small area. To activate fine 
scrolling, just click and hold on a scroll bar handle, or click on the handle while holding 
<key>Shift</key>.</p>
+    <p>Scroll bars in GNOME now feature a new mode that allows fine scrolling. This allows precise movements 
within a small area, and is particularly useful if the scrolled area is very large. To activate fine 
scrolling, just click and hold on a scroll bar handle, or click on the handle while holding 
<key>Shift</key>.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
   </section>
 



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