[release-notes/gnome-3-10] Minor wording change to more-apps.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit bffffd6cb13f0d8209fe4c07f97fa6723511e8ed
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Wed Sep 18 13:03:24 2013 +0100

    Minor wording change to more-apps.page

 help/C/more-apps.page |    8 ++++++--
 1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/more-apps.page b/help/C/more-apps.page
index 4836571..42553dd 100644
--- a/help/C/more-apps.page
+++ b/help/C/more-apps.page
@@ -21,6 +21,10 @@
       <name its:translate="no">Juanjo Marín</name>
       <email its:translate="no">jjmarin gnome org</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
     <license>
       <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
     </license>
@@ -45,7 +49,7 @@
 
   <section id="photos">
     <title>Photos</title>
-    <p><app>Photos</app> is a new application that was first introduced in GNOME &lastversion;. Since then 
it has matured and is now a fully-fledged member of our core application set. <app>Photos</app> allows you to 
browse, organize and print your pictures, and has <app>Online Account</app> integration. Pictures from your 
<gui>Flickr</gui> account can be browsed directly through the application, and support for other online photo 
services is already being worked on. <app>Photos</app> can also send your photos to be displayed on other 
devices, such as DLNA-enabled TVs and phones and other computers running GNOME.</p>
+    <p><app>Photos</app> is a new application that was first introduced in GNOME &lastversion;. Since then, 
it has matured and is now a fully-fledged member of the core application set. <app>Photos</app> allows you to 
browse, organize and print your pictures, and has <app>Online Account</app> integration. Pictures from your 
<gui>Flickr</gui> account can be browsed directly through the application, and support for other online photo 
services is already being worked on. <app>Photos</app> can also be used to send your photos to be displayed 
on other devices, such as DLNA-enabled TVs and phones and other computers running GNOME.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/gnome-photos.png"/>
   </section>
 
@@ -57,7 +61,7 @@
 
   <section id="clocks">
     <title>Clocks</title>
-    <p>The stopwatch and timer in <app>Clocks</app> now have an animated analog timer which both looks great 
and gives additional feedback. <app>Clocks</app> also has geolocation support in 3.10: if possible it will 
automatically detect where in the world you are and show a clock for that time zone.</p>
+    <p>The stopwatch and timer in <app>Clocks</app> now have an animated analog timer which both looks great 
and gives additional feedback. <app>Clocks</app> also has geolocation support in 3.10: if possible it will 
automatically detect where in the world you are and show a clock for the closest city.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/gnome-clocks.png"/>
   </section>