[gnome-user-docs] Update shell-exit for 3.10



commit 72e6f0e8525df61b51c9d317526e6692caf7d822
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Mon Sep 23 20:24:44 2013 +0100

    Update shell-exit for 3.10

 gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page |   49 +++++++++++++++++++++++------------------
 1 files changed, 27 insertions(+), 22 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page
index c003c3d..1e7b565 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page
@@ -1,35 +1,39 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
       xmlns:if="http://projectmallard.org/if/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="shell-exit">
 
   <info>
-
     <link type="guide" xref="shell-overview#desktop" />
     <link type="guide" xref="power" />
     <link type="seealso" xref="power-hibernate"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index" group="#first"/>
 
-    <desc>Learn how to leave your user account, by logging out, switching users,
-    and so on.</desc>
-    <!-- Should this be a guide which links to other topics? -->
-
     <revision pkgversion="3.6.0" date="2012-09-15" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.9.92" date="2013-09-23" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
-      <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">shaunm gnome org</email>
     </credit>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Andre Klapper</name>
-      <email>ak-47 gmx net</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">ak-47 gmx net</email>
     </credit>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Alexandre Franke</name>
-      <email>afranke gnome org</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">afranke gnome org</email>
+    </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+    <desc>Learn how to leave your user account, by logging out, switching users, and so on.</desc>
+    <!-- Should this be a guide which links to other topics? -->
   </info>
 
 <title>Log out, power off, switch users</title>
@@ -40,7 +44,7 @@
   as-is. Incomplete for now</p>
 </comment>
 
-  <p>When you've finished using your computer, you can turn it off, suspend it
+  <p>When you have finished using your computer, you can turn it off, suspend it
  (to save power), or leave it powered on and log out.</p>
 
 <section id="logout">
@@ -49,8 +53,9 @@
   yourself logged in and just switch users. If you switch users, all of
   your applications will continue running, and everything will be where you
   left it when you log back in.</p>
-  <p>To <gui>Log Out</gui> or <gui>Switch User</gui>, click your name on the
-  top bar and select the appropriate option.</p>
+  <p>To <gui>Log Out</gui> or <gui>Switch User</gui>, click the system menu on
+  the right side of the top bar, click your name and then chose the right
+  option.</p>
 
 <note if:test="!platform:gnome-classic">
   <p>The <gui>Log Out</gui> and <gui>Switch User</gui> entries only appear in
@@ -75,8 +80,8 @@
   password to log back in. If you don't lock your screen, it will lock
   automatically after a certain amount of time.</p>
 
-  <p>To lock your screen, click your name on the top bar and select
-  <gui>Lock</gui>.</p>
+  <p>To lock your screen, click the system menu on the right side of the top
+  bar and press the lock screen button at the bottom of the menu.</p>
 
   <p>When your screen is locked, other users can log in to their own accounts
   by clicking <gui>Log in as another user</gui> on the password screen. You
@@ -95,9 +100,9 @@
   computer's functions. A very small amount of power is still used during
   suspend.</p>
 
-  <p>To suspend your computer manually, click your name on the top bar and
-  hold down the <key>Alt</key> key. The <gui>Power Off</gui> option will
-  change to <gui>Suspend</gui>. Select <gui>Suspend</gui>.</p>
+  <p>To suspend your computer manually, click the system menu on the right side
+  of the top bar and hold down the <key>Alt</key> key. The power off button
+  will change to suspend. Press the button.</p>
 
 </section>
 
@@ -108,13 +113,13 @@
 <title>Power off or restart</title>
 
   <p>If you want to power off your computer entirely, or do a full restart,
-  click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Power Off</gui>. A dialog will
-  open offering you to either <gui>Restart</gui> or <gui>Power Off</gui>.</p>
+  click the system menu on the right side of the top bar and press the power
+  off button at the bottom of the menu. A dialog will open offering you the
+  options to either <gui>Restart</gui> or <gui>Power Off</gui>.</p>
 
-  <p>If there are other users logged in, you may not be allowed to
-  power off or restart the computer, because this will end their sessions.
-  If you are an administrative user, you may be asked for your password
-  to power off.</p>
+  <p>If there are other users logged in, you may not be allowed to power off or
+  restart the computer because this will end their sessions.  If you are an
+  administrative user, you may be asked for your password to power off.</p>
 
 <note style="tip">
   <p>You may want to power off your computer if you wish to move it and do not


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