[gnome-user-docs] Update shell-introduction for 3.10
- From: Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-user-docs] Update shell-introduction for 3.10
- Date: Mon, 23 Sep 2013 18:14:48 +0000 (UTC)
commit 3283a526ec063379e5c00bfca40be0f455c40c94
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date: Mon Sep 23 19:03:54 2013 +0100
Update shell-introduction for 3.10
Update screenshots and instructions
gnome-help/C/figures/shell-exit.png | Bin 31043 -> 147911 bytes
gnome-help/C/figures/shell-lock.png | Bin 35848 -> 159640 bytes
gnome-help/C/figures/shell-top-bar.png | Bin 16435 -> 49075 bytes
gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page | 32 +++++++++++++++++++-------------
4 files changed, 19 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/figures/shell-exit.png b/gnome-help/C/figures/shell-exit.png
index 9a26f9a..812b234 100644
Binary files a/gnome-help/C/figures/shell-exit.png and b/gnome-help/C/figures/shell-exit.png differ
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/figures/shell-lock.png b/gnome-help/C/figures/shell-lock.png
index e76b7df..e35cbbe 100644
Binary files a/gnome-help/C/figures/shell-lock.png and b/gnome-help/C/figures/shell-lock.png differ
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/figures/shell-top-bar.png b/gnome-help/C/figures/shell-top-bar.png
index fd155dc..30a2b1a 100644
Binary files a/gnome-help/C/figures/shell-top-bar.png and b/gnome-help/C/figures/shell-top-bar.png differ
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page
index ee227eb..40f4f63 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page
@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
xmlns:if="http://projectmallard.org/if/1.0/"
+ xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its"
type="topic" style="ui"
id="shell-introduction">
@@ -7,21 +8,25 @@
<link type="guide" xref="shell-overview" group="#first"/>
<link type="guide" xref="index" group="#first"/>
- <desc>A visual introduction to your desktop, the top bar, and the
- activities overview.</desc>
-
<revision pkgversion="3.6.0" version="0.2" date="2012-10-13" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.9.92" date="2013-09-23" status="review"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>Shaun McCance</name>
- <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
+ <email its:translate="no">shaunm gnome org</email>
</credit>
<credit type="editor">
<name>Michael Hill</name>
- <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+ <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
+ </credit>
+ <credit type="editor">
+ <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+ <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
</credit>
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+ <desc>A visual introduction to your desktop, the top bar, and the activities overview.</desc>
</info>
<title>Introduction to GNOME</title>
@@ -33,7 +38,7 @@ When you first log in, you will see an empty desktop and the top bar.</p>
<if:choose>
<if:when test="!platform:gnome-classic">
<media type="image" src="figures/shell-top-bar.png"
- width="500" height="40" if:test="!target:mobile">
+ width="500" if:test="!target:mobile">
<p>GNOME shell top bar</p>
</media>
</if:when>
@@ -161,7 +166,7 @@ When you first log in, you will see an empty desktop and the top bar.</p>
<if:choose>
<if:when test="!platform:gnome-classic">
<media type="image" src="figures/shell-exit.png"
- width="250" height="200" style="floatend floatright"
+ width="250" style="floatend floatright"
if:test="!target:mobile">
<p>User menu</p>
</media>
@@ -175,12 +180,13 @@ When you first log in, you will see an empty desktop and the top bar.</p>
</if:when>
</if:choose>
- <p>Click your name in the top-right corner to manage your profile and
+ <p>Click the system menu in the top-right corner to manage your profile and
your computer.</p>
+<!-- Apparently not anymore. TODO: figure out how to update status.
<p>You can quickly set your availability directly from the menu. This will set
your status for your contacts to see in instant messaging applications such as
- <app>Empathy</app>.</p>
+ <app>Empathy</app>.</p>-->
<comment>
<cite date="2012-02-19">shaunm</cite>
@@ -219,16 +225,16 @@ messages will be presented, such as when your battery is critically low.</p>
<title>Lock Screen</title>
<media type="image" src="figures/shell-lock.png"
- width="250" height="156" style="floatend floatright"
+ width="250" style="floatend floatright"
if:test="!target:mobile">
<p>Lock Screen</p>
</media>
<p>When you lock your screen, or it locks automatically, the lock screen is
displayed. In addition to protecting your desktop while you're away from your
- computer, the lock screen displays the date, time, and your name as the
- logged-in user. It also shows information about your battery and network
- status, and allows you to control media playback.</p>
+ computer, the lock screen displays the date and time. It also shows
+ information about your battery and network status, and allows you to control
+ media playback.</p>
<list style="compact">
<item><p><link xref="shell-lockscreen">Learn more about the lock screen.</link>
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