[gnome-user-docs] Update shell-introduction for 3.10



commit 3283a526ec063379e5c00bfca40be0f455c40c94
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Mon Sep 23 19:03:54 2013 +0100

    Update shell-introduction for 3.10
    
    Update screenshots and instructions

 gnome-help/C/figures/shell-exit.png    |  Bin 31043 -> 147911 bytes
 gnome-help/C/figures/shell-lock.png    |  Bin 35848 -> 159640 bytes
 gnome-help/C/figures/shell-top-bar.png |  Bin 16435 -> 49075 bytes
 gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page   |   32 +++++++++++++++++++-------------
 4 files changed, 19 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/figures/shell-exit.png b/gnome-help/C/figures/shell-exit.png
index 9a26f9a..812b234 100644
Binary files a/gnome-help/C/figures/shell-exit.png and b/gnome-help/C/figures/shell-exit.png differ
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/figures/shell-lock.png b/gnome-help/C/figures/shell-lock.png
index e76b7df..e35cbbe 100644
Binary files a/gnome-help/C/figures/shell-lock.png and b/gnome-help/C/figures/shell-lock.png differ
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/figures/shell-top-bar.png b/gnome-help/C/figures/shell-top-bar.png
index fd155dc..30a2b1a 100644
Binary files a/gnome-help/C/figures/shell-top-bar.png and b/gnome-help/C/figures/shell-top-bar.png differ
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page
index ee227eb..40f4f63 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page
@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
       xmlns:if="http://projectmallard.org/if/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="ui"
       id="shell-introduction">
 
@@ -7,21 +8,25 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="shell-overview" group="#first"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index" group="#first"/>
 
-    <desc>A visual introduction to your desktop, the top bar, and the
-    activities overview.</desc>
-
     <revision pkgversion="3.6.0" version="0.2" date="2012-10-13" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.9.92" date="2013-09-23" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
-      <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">shaunm gnome org</email>
     </credit>
     <credit type="editor">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
-      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+    <desc>A visual introduction to your desktop, the top bar, and the activities overview.</desc>
   </info>
 
 <title>Introduction to GNOME</title>
@@ -33,7 +38,7 @@ When you first log in, you will see an empty desktop and the top bar.</p>
 <if:choose>
 <if:when test="!platform:gnome-classic">
 <media type="image" src="figures/shell-top-bar.png"
-       width="500" height="40" if:test="!target:mobile">
+       width="500" if:test="!target:mobile">
   <p>GNOME shell top bar</p>
 </media>
 </if:when>
@@ -161,7 +166,7 @@ When you first log in, you will see an empty desktop and the top bar.</p>
 <if:choose>
 <if:when test="!platform:gnome-classic">
 <media type="image" src="figures/shell-exit.png"
-       width="250" height="200" style="floatend floatright"
+       width="250" style="floatend floatright"
        if:test="!target:mobile">
   <p>User menu</p>
 </media>
@@ -175,12 +180,13 @@ When you first log in, you will see an empty desktop and the top bar.</p>
 </if:when>
 </if:choose>
 
-  <p>Click your name in the top-right corner to manage your profile and
+  <p>Click the system menu in the top-right corner to manage your profile and
   your computer.</p>
 
+<!-- Apparently not anymore. TODO: figure out how to update status.
   <p>You can quickly set your availability directly from the menu. This will set
   your status for your contacts to see in instant messaging applications such as
-  <app>Empathy</app>.</p>
+  <app>Empathy</app>.</p>-->
 
 <comment>
 <cite date="2012-02-19">shaunm</cite>
@@ -219,16 +225,16 @@ messages will be presented, such as when your battery is critically low.</p>
 <title>Lock Screen</title>
 
 <media type="image" src="figures/shell-lock.png"
-       width="250" height="156" style="floatend floatright"
+       width="250" style="floatend floatright"
        if:test="!target:mobile">
   <p>Lock Screen</p>
 </media>
 
   <p>When you lock your screen, or it locks automatically, the lock screen is
   displayed. In addition to protecting your desktop while you're away from your
-  computer, the lock screen displays the date, time, and your name as the
-  logged-in user. It also shows information about your battery and network
-  status, and allows you to control media playback.</p>
+  computer, the lock screen displays the date and time. It also shows
+  information about your battery and network status, and allows you to control
+  media playback.</p>
 
 <list style="compact">
   <item><p><link xref="shell-lockscreen">Learn more about the lock screen.</link>


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