[gnome-clocks/wip/mallard-help: 22/39] help: Modify timer.page

[Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>]

commit b108ef5f3f347ffcb6d9413990081fa4ce4d12a8
Author: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
Date:   Sat Sep 14 21:56:50 2013 +0530

    help: Modify timer.page
    
    Remove the word "respectively".
    Describe the notification given by the timer.
    Add introductory <p> element.

 help/C/timer.page |   14 ++++++++++----
 1 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/timer.page b/help/C/timer.page
index 8c0237a..350e079 100644
--- a/help/C/timer.page
+++ b/help/C/timer.page
@@ -21,12 +21,17 @@
 
   <title>Set the timer</title>
 
+  <p><app>Clocks</app> has a timer that can be set to notify you after a time
+  period of your choice. When you set the timer, it counts down by second from
+  the set time and notifies you when the countdown reaches zero.</p>
+
   <steps>
+    <title>To set the timer:</title>
     <item>
       <p>Press the <gui style="button">Timer</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Set your time limit, by choosing the right hour, minute and second
+      <p>Set your time period, by choosing the right hour, minute and second
       values.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
@@ -35,12 +40,13 @@
     </item>
   </steps>
 
-  <p>When the countdown reaches zero, you will be notified.</p>
+  <p>When the countdown reaches zero, a notification message will be displayed
+  at the bottom of your screen, along with a tiny beep.</p>
 
   <note style="tip">
     <p>Once the timer has started its countdown, you can press the
-    <gui style="button">Pause</gui> and <gui style="button">Reset</gui> button
-    to pause and reset the timer, respectively.</p>
+    <gui style="button">Pause</gui> button to pause the timer. To reset the
+    timer, press the <gui style="button">Reset</gui> button.</p>
   </note>
 
 </page>