[gnome-clocks/wip/mallard-help: 17/39] help: Modify world-add.page



commit e9c269c131906fe4fca03cd631dfd4c2ab321811
Author: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
Date:   Sun Sep 8 21:56:02 2013 +0530

    help: Modify world-add.page
    
    Corrected language/grammar in the steps list.

 help/C/world-add.page |   11 ++++++++---
 1 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/world-add.page b/help/C/world-add.page
index 58d8751..e4de75e 100644
--- a/help/C/world-add.page
+++ b/help/C/world-add.page
@@ -21,19 +21,24 @@
 
   <title>Add a new world clock</title>
 
+  <p>When you add a new city to the world clock, <app>Clocks</app> displays the
+  time in that city. The world clock also tells you if it is day or night in
+  the city.</p>
+
   <steps>
     <item>
       <p>Press the <gui style="button">World</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Press the <gui style="button">New</gui> button to add a new city to
-      the world clock.</p>
+      the world clock. Alternatively, you could also press
+      <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>N</key></keyseq>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Type the name of the city of your choice in the field provided.</p>
+      <p>Type the name of a city of your choice in the field provided.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select the city of your choice from the list.</p>
+      <p>Select an appropriate location from the list.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Press the <gui style="button">Add</gui> button to finish.</p>


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