[gnome-clocks/wip/mallard-help: 62/68] Review alarm-remove help page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 51652e7fd51cc05b164bacdd86904e76084b688a
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Sun Sep 15 22:13:11 2013 +0100

    Review alarm-remove help page
    
    Also fix a small mistake in the world-remove page

 help/C/alarm-remove.page |   26 +++++++++++++++-----------
 help/C/world-remove.page |    2 +-
 2 files changed, 16 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/alarm-remove.page b/help/C/alarm-remove.page
index b9ae552..b251354 100644
--- a/help/C/alarm-remove.page
+++ b/help/C/alarm-remove.page
@@ -5,8 +5,9 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#alarm-clock"/>
+    <link type="seealso" xref="alarm-edit"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.9" date="2013-09-03" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-09-15" status="delete"/>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -15,30 +16,33 @@
       <email its:translate="no">aruna evam gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
-    <desc>Delete an alarm when you no longer need it.</desc>
+    <desc>Delete an alarm which you no longer need.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Remove an alarm</title>
-  <p>If you no longer need one of your alarm reminders, you can delete it.</p>
+
+  <p>You can delete alarms which you no longer need.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
       <p>Press the <gui style="button">Alarm</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Press the button with a tick mark on the top right corner.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Select the alarms you wish to delete from the list.</p>
+      <p>Right click on the alarm. You can press the button with the tick mark
+      in the top right corner and select the alarm which you want to
+      delete.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Press <gui style="button">Delete</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Press the <gui style="button">Delete</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
-  <note style="tip">
-    <p>Alternately, you can right click on an alarm, to bring up the delete button.</p>
-  </note>
+  <p>You can select more than one alarm at a time for deletion.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/world-remove.page b/help/C/world-remove.page
index 79d0c3b..8410886 100644
--- a/help/C/world-remove.page
+++ b/help/C/world-remove.page
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
       <p>Press the <gui style="button">World</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Right click on the world clock. You can press the button with a tick
+      <p>Right click on the world clock. You can press the button with the tick
       mark in the top right corner and select the clock which you want to
       delete.</p>
     </item>